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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Try ....

... getting an Editor and/or a Proof Reader.

Go to Literotica Index; Volunteer Editors!

That way some of your spelling, grammatical and punctuation errors might be weeded out!!

'Favorited'??

Not by a VERY long way!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
confusing

I like the story but youre all over the place, not clear on what to read first, second...can you maybe clear it up?

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