All Comments on 'Trapped, Trained and Twisted Pt. 07'

by KristinKailey

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DevinDelisiousDevinDelisiousover 2 years ago

Another great chapter to this story. The suspense is great because you can’t tell where this whole thing is going. Thank you for the great work and I look forward to read it the next chapter

Godfather8965Godfather8965over 2 years ago

Wasn’t dark at all I loved it.

illuminatio2dragonisilluminatio2dragonisover 2 years ago

I rather liked your story, you also have a very fine sense of humor underlining it. I wanted to give you 5 Stars at first but refrained from doing so in the end because of the last paragraph. We live in a free world with free speech/opinion which is a human right for everyone. You probably would want to express your opinion in public, wouldn't you. The same right is for everybody else too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story! I would like to see some harsher punishments for the cunt similar to previous stories. Perhaps master could rent her to people for some money?

stephie6262stephie6262over 2 years ago

I like very very much this story. Beauty is a very beautiful pony but it's very sorry that she came back with her master

I prefer mistress Anna

I am a french girl 22 years old

It's not my life but if it was possible i will like have that life

Kisses

Stephir

rickylaw01rickylaw01about 1 year ago

Arnie needs to carry a stun gun with him. Although he has brainwashed the Cunt he is a weak man who can't protect his property.

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I've been writing erotic stories for a while as I explore bdsm and fetish and learn more about what I enjoy about it. I was active for a while on some Reddits as well as in Second Life and it was a great way for me to figure out what I liked about fetish and BDSM play. I do ...