All Comments on 'Travelling for Business'

Good premise.

But sadly, lacks details of the sex.

She give him a blowjob. Her first blowjob ever. She never asks if it feels good. She never tells him how it feels to suck him. She never does anything with his balls, or even asks him if he'd like her to play with them? Kiss them? Suck them?

Nothing much with her breasts. Why?

He's never seen a real pussy before. Why no dialog about how it looks? Smells? Tastes?

Why no dialog while he's eating her pussy? She doesn't tell him how good it feels. She doesn't give him any pointers/instructions about what to do. Where? How fast? Slow?

No explanation about why this virgin has shaved her pussy.

No explanation about why she doesn't care that he has no condom. Is she on the pill?

Could have been five stars. Four stars -- being generous.

good erotic coupling

Thanks for the fun read, 5-stars.