by BluDraygn
Leaving a cliff hanger like that is just mean, otherwise i loved it looking forward to chapter 20
Oh no, that does NOT sound good. This chapter was very exciting as usual, and I particularly enjoyed the cultural background provided. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
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Went to your website and saw the beginnings of the illustrated graphic, can’t wait for that to be finished. It really helped with visualizing the characters.
Absolutely can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great story telling.
Ok....it has been 2 and a 1/2 months. Or you going to release any more here? If so...since it has been so long can we get a couple of chapters? Instead of just one?
Dam your as bad as (part wolf) now I'm stuck waiting on a nother writer this sucks. :P
For all those waiting, we beggars cannot be choosers on a free site that we don’t have to pay anything to. While I understand the frustration, I feel it too, attacking the author does nothing but convince authors to leave the site, or authors thinking about publishing here to keep their stories and ideas to themselves. As BluDraygn said on their patreon page “the fecal matter has impacted the rotating air movement appliance.” So I’m sure when they have time they will get back to providing us with an excellent story. To BluDraygn thanks for the story it’s really great has had me on pins and needles, I am excited to see where it goes and how it finished!
Blu, love your stuff, and it's definitely worth waiting for. Wish you all the best.
I just finished reading all of Kal's adventures over the past few days. Amazing reads. I hope they continue soon
Another great chapter with cliffhanger ending!
Sidekicks are expendable, but I'm really attached to Kashka!