All Comments on 'TRC - Searching for the Sky Ch. 28'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenalmost 4 years ago
Hey there Kithana...

Nice weather today? No? Just gunna scream at me. Okay.

So awesome. I love the Lamia. So right to make someone that looks like that, but isn't bound to the expected mentality of the source material. She would definitely make a short-list of immortal guardians I'd enjoy were I in his position. ^.^

I didn't think I'd be learning or perhaps just reframing stuff about Ikuno this chapter. But damn, did she fall for Kal hard, and fast. Iirc, that was the first bit of magic she did with him, it may have even been the right after she gave him oral for the first time. Considering the reaction, I don't think she would have used something like that unless she was already sure of herself.

Poor Kal. If it had been just him, he'd only have to deal with 1/3 the volume, though who knows what effects this will have. But since the idea didn't come to him in time, Sera had to save him. And then Graff her. Poor Kal. I'd wish him good luck, but the point of these kind of epic stories is that he makes it, mostly... Here's hoping the price he pays isn't too steep.

!! Wait a damn second. I think I just saw something. I was going to make an allusion to something but now... I think I'm right. Like actually right. Holy shit, if I'm right. DAMN! Holy fricking shit! Seriously?!? Okay, I'm going way too deep down the rabbit hole with this one, getting soooo far ahead of myself. But now I have hope ^.^

Thank you for this PACKED chapter of epicness. "And thank-" *through gritted teeth* "- you for that ever so lovely cliffhanger." *Half happy grin/ half forced smile* "I love it." ~joking aside... Oh man... I want the next one already... But, honestly, take what time you want and need to make it just as awesome. I'd far rather wait for the well seasoned and perfectly cooked steak, than have just any ole meat throw to us salivating wolves. No offense to Dax ^.^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Much better

This was really worth it! The last installment was so short ,I found myself frustrated. This is such a good story.ove it! Love it ! LOVE IT !

SlofredSlofredalmost 4 years ago

Chapter is so great, I can hardly wait for the next one. But take as long as it takes to make it as good as the previous 28. 5 stars again

M_grey555M_grey555almost 4 years ago

Bro that's interesting how does the fairy know ikuno and how does ikuno know prentas' magic

BluDraygnBluDraygnalmost 4 years agoAuthor

@M_grey555

The answer to that can be found waaaaay back in Chapter 7 of Oni and the Farmer. :D

SuggestionSuggestionalmost 4 years ago
Good Job

I loved the way you used Graff and Sera to give reminders about who Kelthor was. That was a good trick. Well done. These last 2 chapters have been so well done. Keep up the good work. We are all enjoying it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Lovin it

You animal. 4 chapters last month?¿

skippersdadskippersdadover 3 years ago

Can not stop reading.

Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

Excellent. Are we getting there now?

anubeloreanubeloreover 2 years ago

Wasn't expecting Kithana to react that way to hearing Ikuno's name...but then again, I can't be too surprised.

Great chapter, yet again!

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New story submitted! Beyond Worlds: Mis-taken Hero Ch 01 TRC Ch 43 will be coming right after this one, and posting these two together is part of the reason I only submitted the one chapter last month. Also, a new The Witch's Offering chapter is up on Patreon, as is the sta...