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Anonymousover 3 years agoCould have done with a proof read
The interaction with Captain John Cook and James Blackthorne was pretty rough reading, given that you repeatedly called them both James.
For example:
"James' head wasn't even as big as Captain James curled fist."
John and James are such basic names, no wonder you got them mixed up.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoGood start, so when does chapter 2 get released?
I mean it has been four years for one chapter.
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