All Comments on 'Tree Hugger'

I like the setting you put this experience in. I would have like a bit more description of the natural atmosphere and how it contributed to the erotic encounter. The way you handled the forced "rape" or encounter was good, but I do think you could have contrasted up the erotic climax with a primal fear coupled with sexual urges that could have built up over the mundane day or days, if you see what I mean. Fear and sex drive adrenalin, just from different causes, but can lead pleasurable release of sexual energy. I think the counterpoint between the two can heighten the experience.