All Comments on 'Triad Ch. 03'

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WindySwimmingWindySwimmingabout 8 years ago
Enjoying This

Great character development & love this treatment of polyamory. Yearn for ensuing chapters. Lol! Kudos!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More!

A few more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A bit rushed

Developing things more slowly would be a bit more realistic

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great development

Great pace. I enjoy the way each character has been given time to allow the relationship to grow. I see the room for more growth for this three-some.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 8 years ago
Another wonderful winner!!!

Chapter 4 cannot be soon enough!

coigachboycoigachboyabout 8 years ago
Chapter 4

Hope you are going to continue with this storyline.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 2 years ago

very good, thought the interaction with Abby's parents was a little weak. They should have known that Abby would be with you after 8 or 10 summers. Anna would be the outsider.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Wow, what fantasy land!

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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