Trials of Enchantress Ch. 01

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Tia gently hugged Mark that was slowly falling asleep from exhaustion. Maybe her time in the brothel isn't going to be that unpleasant.

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Bimo897Bimo897about 1 year agoAuthor

That is a very valid criticism. Is there anything else that breaks your suspension of disbelief?

To be honest I am not even a native English speaker, let alone a writer, (a tech person by trade really) so any tips on character development or proper world building would be appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

No woman wants to be a whore! She has the power to escape. Her not using it, now that is unbelievable.

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