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Click hereTia gently hugged Mark that was slowly falling asleep from exhaustion. Maybe her time in the brothel isn't going to be that unpleasant.
That is a very valid criticism. Is there anything else that breaks your suspension of disbelief?
To be honest I am not even a native English speaker, let alone a writer, (a tech person by trade really) so any tips on character development or proper world building would be appreciated.
No woman wants to be a whore! She has the power to escape. Her not using it, now that is unbelievable.