All Comments on 'Tribal Bonds Ch. 01'

Have read many of your contributions to this site, including the Sultanah series. Enjoyable reads! I love the way you build your stories and let them develop. Looking forward to you posting future parts to its final conclusion.

Wonderful first chapter, can't wait for second chapter. Loved it.

Glad that you have returned AND are continuing a really good series!

Very good, sexy and hot. More please :)

yum! missed your posts and this series looks like a winner.

And she had bigger cock and the men force the boy to get fucked up by the bigger hairy Masculine girl to this feminine boy and they both fall in love with each other and in the last she rescue both of them

Perfect story with my fantasy girl. read a lot of fantasy, and I fantasise about the “perfect” girl. A girl with a cock and vagina and also a fighter. This story combines everything. I look forward to your next story, and I would love to meet those girls.

I liked the story. A good start. Perhaps more details about exactly how big these girls extra equipment is would be good. Don't hasten their freedom if that is where you are going. Thses 2 have lots to work out and it's been fairly 1 sided so far. Hope to read more soon.

Love good writing with a plot. Thank you! Please write more.

A great opening chapter. I wish I could be Kedi she is one lucky girl so far.

I was a big fan of the Sultanah so I’m very excited to read this new tale. Very good start.

You have placed your main character in great peril and I look forward to the rest of the story. I do wonder if we will get to see the Sultana again. Thanks.

I enjoy her conflicting emotions between morality and depravity, and am pleased to see which of those is winning.

Rare combination of story telling, plot and erotica. Thanks!

I love the struggle of power in this story. Its perfectly illustrated here!

Wow... Just wow. I had no idea I had this link until I read your story. The writing was fantastic and perfectly balanced between tantalizingly delicate and salaciously obscene. The pacing was perfection as well; the depth of character and plot in the slow build up really added to the complexity of emotion you captured in her experience. This was really fantastically done, and I can't wait to read more.

Lol so the protagonist is racist? That's hot. Especially when she gets fucked by the "inferior" race

The main character is a tribal woman who hates a rival tribe. They aren’t a different “Race.” They look a lot alike, after all. But she is a bigot. I like for things to happen in my stories. One of those things is for characters to change and grow (through sex) to become better people. If you read the rest of the story, you can follow that journey of change.

This is my extreme humble request ,Please continue "The Sultannah".Its an amazing and Thrilling.Your writing style is impressive and lot more professional.

I don’t know if the request for comments is still relevant, but: everything is great as a start, you conveyed emotions very well. I had problems with the names of the tribes, or they are too complex to understand or something, maybe this is just my problem *. thank you very much for your work (⁠◡⁠ ⁠ω⁠ ⁠◡⁠)