by YKN4949
This is an incredible end to an erotic and emotional story.
Loved it.so much. Hope to see more of it someday.
It was a long slow believable change in the main character for her to accept the new tribe and her new life. Very well told. Thanks for posting a complete story. Thanks and happy holidays!
My favourite author on Literotica. I enjoy the sexual tension, and also the loving acceptance that your stories bring to bear. I hunger for more.
I think our heroine was let off a bit lightly. I would have liked for her to endure the trials that her sworn enemy had faced, but ramped up to "atone" for her crimes, to further prove her devotion to the tribe. But overall, a delightful naughty romp.
Been a while since reading one this involved..kept me reading and enjoying it...looking
For more from this writer!!!
My fav story of yours was always "A Big Side Effect," one that I wish you'd expanded into many chapters. But this was great. I really liked the hand-to-hand combat scene, too. Totally worth the time, and a multi-chapter story I'm very glad I read. Keep up the good work!!
Great creative writing and such a wide range of emotions throughout the story.
We've only just seen a glimpse of the life in the Hayalet. I'd love to see more and see Kedi face her Buz past... it al just buzzed past 😁
I love the concept of priestesses marrying their daughters off to others 'en bloc'.
Honestly an amazing story. You should consider doing amazon books, i would buy them!
Granted you do miss some grammatical editing, that being said-excellent! The story weaving is even better than the pure lewdness which is superb. Often smut is just gutteral. You blend the basest nasty sex with a soft emotion that turns slutty to beautiful warmth!!
My personal preference in erotica is for short and sweet descriptions of sexual encounters and then back to the plot. Despite that I am still a fan of yours because your stories are very well written and inventive. While this isn’t as epic as the Sultanah was it’s a very engaging and entertaining story that compares favorably with it.