All Comments on 'Tribal Hunt Pt.02'

Please this is a great story line!!

Well, I love it so I gave it 5 stars. It's not set in modern era, ding ding that's bonus points. Didn't kill the little lynx, who knows some day that lynx might return the favor and save Anarungu's life.

Other than a few awkward words here and there (sacred mother's birth hole) I can't complain. Thank you, looking forward to the next chapter of the tale.

One of the.best story that I had read online, please bro don't make her admit yet maybe after some more struggling. Please give us more of it.

I guess it might be awkward because even though it's not a totally authentic tribe, I avoid using words like 'vagina,' etc. So 'mother's birth hole' seems like something that fit in tribe's perspective of life and productivity.

I get it, it serves the purpose of transporting us to those times.

But even ancient tribes had to have words for the female genitals so an occasional pussy, cunt, vagina (man I read too many porn stories, lol) is okay since the story is told in English.

Unless you use "their" word for it (goona, manua?! ha ha I suck at this) which might be too much. I'm just kidding, I actually don't mind the words you used.

My personal pet peeve would be Mom's figure being more curvy, her wide fertile hips mesmerizing the inexperienced youth but now we're going into personal taste ha ha.

Thanks for the reply, afs4. Cool to know you read them!

So good!

Please don't make it into some NTR!

Thank you for your feedback. I read every comment on every story I write)

P.S. I don't write NTR stories. (as I said many times before, Offspring is not NTR. I don't write NTR guys. No NTR.)