All Comments on 'Tricia's Dirty Hole'

What was with the big gap in the story?

At one point the wife seemed horrified that she had gotten high and cheated - wanting nothing to do with this Tim. Next thing we know she is screwing him and we get back history saying she was early in the marriage aswell. It didnt gell for me at all.

Would have been nice to see what happened after the divorce but not necessary as it tends to be all the same in this type of story anyway.

Please give us a sequel.

Nice story. You actually finished it, instead of ending it too soon like you do for most of your stories, and there was none of the cuckolding crap you sometimes do. But I agree with the below poster about there being a big disconnect between how she was acting most of the story, firmly and repeatedly turning Tim down, and the end. What happened there?! And then having it turn out she'd even fucked Tim years earlier while in their marriage is like out and out cheating, because if that were true, her friend would have known about it, since she knew so much else about her and Tim at that same period of time, and the husband would have found out about it while overhearing them talking. I'm all for surprise twists, but you can't alter the reality of what you had happen earlier in the story to deliver a surprise twist at the end.

I don't understand how she changed, but she did and she knew he would dump her ass so what happened?

This story needs to be Followed-Up. there are too many things left to settle .. like did Trisha get back with Lover Boy after being Released from the Hospital?

Did she bring Lover Boy around her Children and how Did Daddy do with that?

Besides Trisha seems too stubborn to give up even after Final Paperwork.

never existed. Trash IS trash and trash will always come out in a consistent constant manner, just like this bunch of writers who turn this trash out.

Classic awful JPB. No explanations... no motitvations

... no consistency... Just a series of actions thrown together then for some re ason called " a story".

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WHY? WHY would any GUY marry anidiot bitch who gets so stoned that when she is about to be raped she is Giggling?

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WHY would any man marry a idiot who tells him to fuck off you are not the boss of me...then when she shows up several weeks later ...Lies the first time she see him?

"You didnt call me! " After all all ... all this guy tried to do was save her life.

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WHY ? why would a husband knowing his wife's reaction and history with Pot... say sure go and have some fun... then lose track of her for HOURS at a time at a party?

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WHY? WHY? would this husband after Throwing up violently

.... hen go home and fuck her? He has seen his wife fuck the other guy and hear her say "like you use to" . This causes a violent reaction in him... so to then go home and screw this whore makes NO sense.

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Stupidity makes for unsympathetic characters

a fairly simple piece, but again a too simple and easy ending. It is almost as if you run out of steam at the end of your stories.

You knocked the ball out of the park with this one. Too bad you couldn't do something about Maggie and maybe put her in the hospital also.

TailEndPete

This was one of your better stories. I recently read an article explaining that women actually cheat as much as men, but they are much better at hiding it. This was probably the case for Tricia. My family also has a history of alcohol abuse as does my wife’s family. We decided not to ever drink because such behavior tends to be genetic. So at first, I could not understand why he would marry a pot-head, until you had her quit. That said, he was too credulous by giving her the go ahead to have a hit then not accompany her. That, and the sloppy seconds were the two areas that seemed out of character to me. I normally would have ranked this a 75% due to these inconsistencies, but gave you 100% to counter some of the thoughtless comments below. Thanks for writing. Oh, Harryin, the answers to your questions: 1) She quit smoking pot after that experience. 2) She told him that he didn’t own her while they were first dating, not when they were married. I actually thought that he handled it well. His strength changed her behavior. 3) & 4), I agree with you, they were weak points in this story. One last comment: Several commentators always trash these free stories. Why do you even bother to read them? If you don’t like JPB, skip his stories. -ttom

this author over and over, keep continuing to read his stories. Why? It's just a story, why take it so seriously? Do yourself a favor, stop reading authors that don't do it for you, instead of whining about them. ML

This is what I liked about this story:

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<i>"I earned the right to your love Trisha. I bought it. I paid for it. I've worked my ass off to give you a good life; to provide for you and give you the things you wanted. I earned the right to your body. Did Tim do anything to earn what you gave him?

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I worked for the money that I dropped in that jar. What you did was the same as letting Tim walk into our bedroom and help himself to a handful of that change. My change. Money that I had earned. Actually it was much worse that just letting Tim take a handful of what I had worked for. What you did was pick up the jar and hold it out to him and say:

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"Here, help yourself."</i>

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Brilliantly said. How she can't understand after this...

Well done.

one of your better ones bob

It is not obvious to me why she let her take the dope again, but he compensated by giving her a get out of jail free card. Still he never should have agreed to letting her go out with Maggie again. He had to tell her what he knew, if he wanted to keep her. Her rationalization that he was not losing anything by her fucking Tim was a classic and did not keep him from administrating the consequences.

why do some of us keep reading JPB stories? First this story was issued / published about 2 yearsago. Since it was re-submitted I was hoping that JPB might have altered it in some way. He has been known to do that from time to time.

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<b>Also please note I did NOT say I hated this story.

</b> I did express my exasperation that JPB does Not work or explain some the motivations of his characters which given how Good a writer JPB is... is very odd.

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<b>Yes I said it...JPB is a GOOD writer.</b>

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I DO agree with sir smeggy that part at the end of the story where the husband argues that he had EARNED the RIGHT be her only lover and her husband... was the best thing about this story and it could be the Best thing that JPB has ever written.

read where your main character stomped the ass out of the other guy...are you getting some balls finally or has me constant harping at you writers finally got to you..No matter what i love that fiction is comming close to real life..I was thinking for a while that the other guy was getting away with it all the time. I actually thought there was some funny thinking going on..if you get my drift..

I AGREE WITH SEVERAL OTHERS, I BELIEVE THIS TO BE U BEST. THANKS

This story really moved me. It's action packed with highs and lows in a story about a husband and wife. The wife had sexual needs and she'd fill full them come hell or high water. Tricia sure tried to manipulate Rob, but rob finally figured things out for himself and became proactive. Great job JP Bob. RAG

Really liked the testimony of the by-standers defending Rob's actions after he beat the shit out of Tim. Great story and thanks for writing it.

It doesn't matter if JPB writes stories where the husband goes along with it or not, these are all pretty much the same story over and over. For example, where would JPB be w/o Radio Shack and voice activated recorders? Either way, a formula is a formula.

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As to why I still open these? Well, to see if there is anything new. Ya see, the funny thing is you actually have to at least skim a story to know what is in it.

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"maggs" get some retribution for her part in all of this. Also would have liked to see results of dna testing. couldn't see why he still had sex without any testing for std"s. All in All this was the best story by JPB I've read so far. All he needs to do is think of more endings with better in depth explanations. Still, you can really see how he has grown as a writer.

GoodJob, JPB, but i would like to see the aftermath after divorce.

She was a piece of shit and he was worse with his watching and intended sloppy seconds which no sane real man would even contemplate.<P>

So bobie - you haven't changed - you're still a sick wimp into watching big cocks and male self disrespect with humiliation your theme.<P>

You will always have a very few self cucks like you that follow wimpily as they are jadedly addicted to the subhuman fetishes you spew.<P>

Talented to a small degree - repetitive to a fault & always a weak sick wimpy male acting like you want him.<P>

How sad cuckster bobie.

I didn't like everything about it. For example, him willingly taking the sloppy seconds. And...I'm not sure how plausible it is that he wouldn't have found out long before with how closely he was watching. Finally, she seemed genuinely upset at her best friend for "setting her up" when, apparently she was banging him anyway. Even with all that, it's silly to think that anyone will like every aspect of a story and I loved their discussion after he caught her enough to make up for anything I may not have liked. Welcome back, JPB.

while dating. She is trash was in college, is now. Want to bet she wasnt pulling trains while she refused his phone calls?

To me you did it again, good story. Was surprised knowing her past that he didn't go out to the Prking lot looking for her, anyway...how about the Epilogue: Mention things happening between or to Maggie and the Ex!

At least he wasn't a total wimp, in the end.

If you are awake, you know what is going on and there are no 9" cocks on normal people and only 1% are 8" or more.

I didn't like the wimp in the middle of the story, He maned up in the end and said fuck that slut. And it funny that dwornock gave it a one, considering it's so much like his life except he kept the wife.

Gave it a **** rating. With friends like Maggie who needs enemies.

The analogies you use rock. Most of the story was pretty boilerplate, but that doesn't mean they are bad.

But the analogy of buying and paying for a relationship resonated. The bit about the change jar also worked very well.

Two things I wish I had written.

There's this creepy person on here who's always commenting on cock sizes..:. I just want to let him / her know you are wrong ! There are 9", 10" ,11", 12" cocks out here... I don't know where your getting your incorrect information but 10" cocks are not a myth .... My ex boyfriend had a 10 1/2 " I know because I measured it... I'm tired of every story the only thing you can comment on is the size of the cock... Don't believe everything you read, I promise you there are 10" cocks out here...Some people are blessed with huge dicks you must be one of the less forturnate due to your obsession with proving there's no such thing as a 10" cock .... Yours must be a 6"....

Anyways just thought I get that out the way... Love the story , if I was a guy I'm not sure I would've taken her junky ass back either... I wouldn't of slept with her after some dude got through dropping his load in there, so yeah that was pretty grossed:.. If she can't control her drug use to the point where she dosen't remember sucking some guy dick in the parking lot & letting him fuck her , she probably shouldn't be smoking any more... She was a slut after that night she thought she got away with it, that bitch Maggie would've got her ass whip after pulling some shit like that fuck being friends with her.... Those two bitches is a hot mess.: I wished it been a bit longer it seemed sort of rushed, you took more time explaining how they met. I wanted to know if she stopped smoking, I wouldn't leave my children in her hands especially when she claims she doesn't remember the night before...

The bitch Maggie needed to be taken down as well. I've read a few of JPBs loving wives now and there is a sameness about them.

This story - he should have taken out Tim when Tim kept phoning, at that point the marriage was possibly recoverable. Maggie should have got her ass reamed and Rob would have been in the box seat with a wife who knew her husband ain't gonna tolerate crossing the line.

Ending was too fast. Did he have the kids DNA tested? Did he get even with Maggie? Lots of unanswered questions. My solution would have only cost $2.78 plus tax. Six 22 cal bullets at $0.08 each, one for each knee of the assholes, and 2 12 gauge double ought shotgun shells at $1.15 each for a double blast to the mother fuckers balls and cock.. They would all live but be crippled for the rest of their lives so every day they could remember why and good old Tim could be known as stumpy.

A definite JPB 'high point'. Pun intended. Alas, their love is bong gone.

It just needed more detail in the end. Like what were the results of the DNA tests? Other than that the cheating cunt got what she deserved.

JPB did a man with balls.

what balls, he stayed with her after he caught her. Then ate the creampie, what balls? Then instead of getting his kids away for the drug induced whore, he leaves them with her. What balls?

Huedogg, do you read the same stories the rest of us do?

ok dog - with a ball, just one.

A pathetic male character because he felt sorry for her and the kids be honest so they can watch for the signs of a bad person, and she is a bad person/mom/human-being In not telling the growing kids the truth it is the same as hiding it and it always comes out and then they know the truth, but they have been played for suckers by a bitch of a mother and an afraid father.

Let his whore wife get away with everything.

Why do the guys always loose

It was six months after the divorce was final when Maggie, who was a good friend of Trisha that she set her up to give Tim a few blow jobs and then got her so Tim could fuck her in the store room, and then was her cover for Wednesday night when Maggie handed Trisha over to Tim so he could give her a good fucking, disappeared as she left a bar and walked to her car. When she woke up she was facing six men who gave her a choice. The choice was a slow death or fuck anyone they told her to fuck. Maggie chose fucking.

One year later Maggie was dropped off at Trisha’s house. She had AIDS, Chlamydia, syphilis, gonorrhea, and just about every other sexually transmitted disease known to man. She broke down and cried handing her friend, Trisha, an envelope. Trisha was under the care of a doctor after Maggie just disappeared. When she cried to Rob about it he just smiled but said nothing.

Trisha opened the envelope and inside was the DNA results for her children along with the test for Rob. He was not the father of any of them. Trisha let the results fall to the floor. Then Maggie spoke. “The man who gave me the envelope and dropped me off had a message for you. ‘YOU ARE NEXT!’ is what he wanted me to tell you.”

Trisha got up and went upstairs. She had over three hundred pills that she had been hording away for just such a moment.

Grabbing a bottle of Jack she put the pills into an ashtray and looking at Maggie and said, “Some how I just don’t think the sex was all that good, all things considered.”

She and Maggie drank the jack, even had some pizza to help keep everything down, including all of the pills.

As she was passing out she saw Rob, her Rob. He smiled at her and said “Tim had a real bad accident today, and I don’t think they will actually find all of the pieces.” Then he turned and left, making sure to quietly close and lock the door to the house.

Maggie and Trisha were found three days later when the Rob came over before his children were do back and he did not want them to find her. He called the police and told them what he found.

They were buried two days later and Rob and his children lived well on the very large insurance policy he had taken out on Trisha when he first found out she was cheating. He met a nice woman and although they never married they lived together happily for the rest of their lives.

Hope I did not sugar coat it again.

He finally realised he was the main character in a totally contrived fictional fuck story and capitulated to divorce.

Great little ramble from JPB with the usual quota of slick one liners. 4* Edit: 5*

When you write a good one...It IS Really good and leaves us with our imagination to what else went on, where it went from there and was there appropriate payback for all concerned!

Good story - Thanks!

Why is it that all the men in these stories never suspect anything? Their wives are the town whores and they are the only ones that are clueless. They must also be friendless, because no one ever even sends them an anonymous letter. I have seen cheaters get busted with a phone call or a note. I have seen hotel clerks drop a dime when they don't like the cheaters. The world is filled with people who want to squeal on cheaters. Many of them are victims of cheating as well, or they just don't like the people involved.

You are incorrect. These men, almost to a one, KNEW well in advance that their wives were...wild. In this story, he knew she did substances until she got into intensely compromising situations. He knew she liked to drink and dance to excess with other men. She had zero hesitation to wander off from her boyfriend at the party and he knew this well before she was married.

AND dumbass gave her permission to get high. Dumbass also didn't have a very private confab with his wife about what she did, how he knew and how this was her single mulligan and it wasn't going to be repeated or God help her, she was history.

So don't blame the whore. He knew exactly what she was. He was the idiot who knew it and married her.

He knows what he's getting into when he married her so it should really come as no surprise that she's cheating. What bothers me is that he tells her she's a "cheap piece of trash" and that looking at her disgusts him. And he wants to leave his children with that cheap piece of trash? More likely he'd move heaven and earth to get custody. I think JPB needs to go through ALL his stories and write 2nd chapters for at least half of them that are unfinished. But hey - I'll keep reading because most of the time he's entertaining.

... An excellent story. Panther fan.

Damn good story. From beginning to end.

there is no finality or closure, not even temporarily. TK U MLJ LV NV

"What I love about fucking you is that you are another man's wife."

Right there, Tim earned a bullet. Or a sharp knife pulled across his throat. Seriously. Trash like that need to understand someday they'll try out a wife of a man like me.

But thankfully my own similar story happened before I was married and before any kids were involved. My fiancé was wild before we met but calmed down and I thought she would be the perfect woman to make a life with and eventually grow old and die with. Except it turns out at her bachelorette party she ended up pulling a train with three guys she used to know. Somehow they showed up even though it was a girls only party and there was all sorts of people taping it. The next morning there was a knock at my door and when I opened it, there was a disc laying there, saying, "PLAY ME".

Not only did she fuck three guys in front of EVERYONE, at one point she was airtight. And on top of that, she was screaming how good it was and didn't want to stop. That was perfect, she didn't have to stop because I didn't want an old used up toy to play with for the rest of my life.

We rented an apartment together. I worked fast and burned another CD to take with me, the other I left in the computer where she would find and play it. On the computer, I left a note saying "PLAY ME". Next to that, I left the wedding ring of the set she was already wearing. She picked it out and I didn't want anything that was hers. My clothes and just about everything I owned that didn't have her fingerprints on it was loaded in my pickup and I was on the road in less than an hour. We were to be married the next weekend.

I drove north from our hometown of Austin Texas. We had yet to combine our bank accounts so I still had my own with a debit card and no one who could access it. So I didn't care to try and hide where I was going. Within a few hours of my leaving, I figured she would know and then everyone else would understand why I left. Marrying a girl who had fucked a guy or two before we met was one thing. But pulling a train in front of others with such enthusiasm showed me something I hadn't seen. And it was something I didn't' want to have to look at nor live with for the rest of my life.

I had a hefty savings account to draw from. I'd worked every day of my life after graduating from high school and saved most of it. In less than 2 weeks I was working on a farm driving combine and any other jobs that needed done, such as mechanic and welding. Who knew farming corn paid so well! I'd left my hometown in June and by September I was part of a farming community in South Dakota, accepted by everyone in the area. Hard work had more rewards than just the obvious one.

When all the crops were in I finally took the time and called my folks. They were relieved yet angry I hadn't called, although they admitted they knew what happened and that I would be enraged. They told me Debbi had been crushed by what she had done but especially by my leaving her. I didn't need to explain how I felt to my parents. At least Debbi had the balls to show up at my parents house and tell them the wedding was off, she'd done something awful and I'd disappeared. They heard through the grapevine what she'd done and understood why I'd left in the way I did. They did mention both of them promised Debbi they would tell her when I called and wanted me to call her. But I made it perfectly clear I never wanted to heard her voice again. We were all crying by the time the call was over.

Two years later I proposed to another girl. She was the niece of a neighboring farm and moved to the area for work. Farming all mingle and the next thing I knew, Beth and I were basically going out without either one of us actually mention it. We just felt so 'right' with the other, we were pulled together. I proposed one evening when we were swimming down at a local swimming hole in the local river. No one else was there, she was in a modest bikini that she filled out perfectly with a gorgeous figure. I dropped to one knee and she almost fainted!

We were married that fall. Assuming she would want to wait to the next summer I was shocked to find she wanted to marry as soon as we could! A few phone calls and my parents and close family flew in as did hers. It was also a modest affair and I was shocked to find out she was a real live virgin! But after she was broke in, she took to our sex life in a big way.

I took Beth back to my hometown when the boys were 3 1/2 and 5, almost 6. We drove our only vehicle, a 1 ton Ford truck in a 4 door and 4x4 model. Beth puts as many or more miles on it than I do. A little thing at 5' tall and 100lbs, when she's in that truck pulling a stock trailer, you'd think a pro was driving. She can back that thing down a road at top speed and around corners!

We hadn't been in town more than 2 days I think when we first ran across Debbi. We were fueling up when she pulled in with a little Honda Civic. I was looking at her when she started gassing up her little rice burner and she turned to look right into my eyes. It was as if the past 9 years had evaporated. I'm not sure who was the most shocked, her or I. She'd put on a bit of weight since she'd pulled her gangbang but still looked good, at least, from a distance. I hoped she'd leave but no, she lifted her chin and walked straight to me.

Debbi immediately apologized. She blamed alcohol but at the same time, said she took responsibility for her own actions. She was still explaining when Beth came out of the store with the boys and their treats, so I took the time to introduce everyone. As expected, she was gracious and even solemnly shook the boys hands and told them they had a great dad. After we all left, I took the time to explain to Beth that was 'her' and all I received in return was a Mona Lisa-like smile! I had noticed she wasn't wearing a wedding ring and asking my folks later, they weren't aware of her ever marrying anyone, to their knowledge.

I never saw Debbi again. The next year she was killed by a drunk driver on her way home from work. He pulled out from behind a truck in order to pass and Debbi didn't have a chance. We went flowers and I received a phone call from her Mom. Alecia explained she had things from Debbi's apartment she wanted me to have since Debbi and I had purchased them together. I found out, she never left the apartment we were going to live in. She lived there until the day she died, her mom said Debbi explained she felt closer to me there and it allowed her to atone for her mistake a little each day. It saddened me to hear that, just like it did that she never married because she felt it wasn't something she deserved. She'd thrown her chance away like so much trash. I ask Alecia to keep it all herself, there was nothing there for me.

Seems like 2 stories spliced together.

Then he could write about something he knows. He obviously doesn't know anything about sex or human behavior, and what he knows about getting high is just pathetic. I could see this story being written by a inexperienced 13 year old.

very sad

You should have known that there was no way in hell that I was going to say, "Well okay Trish; just don't let it happen again. No way that life was going to continue on as usual. You had to know that.". Yet that is exactly what he did at the party! This author does this a lot. Constantly contradicts his writing. And his stories have no depth at all I'm guessing it is why he has such a hard time with ending his stories.

I’m only on Page 1, and I’m already pissed off! He sees his wife fucking another guy and he doesn’t kick the guy in the nuts and beat the shit out of him because he loves the way she sucks his cock?!

And then he willingly takes sloppy seconds? This guy has wimp cuckold written all over him!

“How was I supposed to know that you didn't know what you were doing.” – Because you’re her “friend” and know how she gets when she’s drunk and high!

"Of course not! Why would you even think something like that?" – How could he not? Let’s see, she fucked Tim nightly while they were broken up, is cheating with him now, why WOULDN’T she keep seeing him after they were back together?

Thank god he finally grew a set, but he could have saved everyone a lot of grief by taking my advice in the first paragraph?

Cheap Slut/Dumb Cuck

Too little.Too late.

Divorce is the only answer in this totally fucked up relationship!

Maggie certainly needs to suffer for her role in this divorce.

Why the fuck didn't he confront the cunt the 1st time he saw Tim slipping his wife the tube steak?!

Epilogue : Nine months after the divorce, Trisha,after having been fucked in her "dirty hole" 69 times by "Hot Dog" Tim,gave birth to twin six pounds bouncing turds.

More wimpy author crap...couldnt even read all of it.

But a bit confused. So after all the protestations on her part about not wanting to cheat on hubby, she suddenly slips into a long term affair, learns that she needs big cock, and is trying to convince hubby that this new reality isn't such a bad deal for him. What happened? I thought she was so stoned she didn't remember a thing and felt horrible when she learned about what she did. How did she learn she liked big dicks? Did she know hubby was listening? Was it all a rouse? Engaging tale, but when a shift occurs in a story, it should occur in a blind.

Don't marry drunks, dopers or sluts. It makes your chances of a good marriage much better. I was just an average twenty something when I picked my wife but I was still smart enough to know the difference between wife material and f@ck material. If you do or don't smoke dope, do or don't drink to excess, DON'T marry someone who does. If you intend to be faithful, don't marry a gangbang girl. It's really quite simple. Doesn't guarantee anything but if you marry a drunk, doper or slut, that almost guarantees you misery.

What man wants to know what it feels like? Its disgusting and probably would have picked up an STD at that moment. I agree with the previous comment, never commit to drinkers or druggies.

Mc knew his wife was being tempted, knew that she was easily manipulated when stoned, and knew that her friend set her up, but instead of going to bat for her and protect his marriage he chose to sit back and watch while she was stalked and worn down until she eventually just gave in. Yet he still had the balls to be upset and angry. It's sad to say but the divorce was the best ending, she clearly deserves better. Hopefully her next husband will actually take action when it comes time to protect his marriage.

I couldn’t have said it better, the comment you made was beyond idiotic. He could forgive the first time, but if you read the rest of the story she kept going back. She was the manipulated anymore after that she was just being a slut.

and this is why his male heroes are all wimps. All of his stories are with wimp husbands. So what is new in this story? 1 star for BS.

It took forever to get to the divorce, but at least it happened. Wish we had some post-divorce joy for Rob; the ending was too abrupt. Not the best of JPB's stories, but nowhere near the worst

Four stars

I always love it when you hear something like: "I don't know why the asshole hit you buddy, but you did a hell of a job defending yourself."

And this always makes me want to hit someone: "It is still a good marriage Rob, okay, so I did play around with Tim, but have I been any less of a wife to you?" Is that what marriage is - just servicing the guy?

He got his freedom and Tim's teeth. That works for me.

The definition was "read Tricia's dirty hole". This was more like bomb the bitch. He finally opened up a can of whoop ass on the slut. Took him long enough.

Your "2-part series" about Tricia is weird. Usually a series is a sequence of connected stories, each story a continuation of the previous one. Your first story is clearly missing an ending, and your second one does not provide that ending. Instead, it is a totally separate story. Pretty crappy way to write.

Nothing for her slut friend Maggie?!?

when you were dating, now you have kids(?) with the whore to destroy their lives to.

Were the kids his? How did his life go afterwards? Hers?

Basically, this is what you risk when you married someone you knew had some serious narcotic issues. It's also a bad idea to marry a girl that kept playing games on you when you were dating, like breaking up so she could party without you around and/or fuck around on you. Honestly, this woman was never wife material - it's very unlikely that she actually remained faithful when they lived outside their hometown.

Fact is, Rob signed up for his divorce the moment his let Tricia smoke pot without him around - I mean, he knew this, so 'know idea why any of this surprise him in the least. I actually believe that he knew, deep down, that his marriage was over after catching her with Tim - he was just in complete denial about it. Sure, he stuck around because he was still in love with his wife, but the mere fact that he started to regularly spy on her shows that he loved way less than he originally did. He was looking for an uncompromising reason to walk away from her... and he fought it.

... Still, like many have already mentioned, there's a whole lot of questions left unanswered, like:

• Was Rob's kids all his?

• Why no payback for Maggie for her role in all of this?

• Why was he OK with paying her alimony, given that she alone fucked up the marriage?

• Seriously - Maggie is going to walk away clean from the mess she originally created?

It's a good story, with one of the best Final Confrontation you're likely to read in a LW tale. Too bad it had so many holes in it... still 'going to favorite it, though.

Tell her how you really feel Rob!

The only thing this story needs, aside from a description of Trish falling into a pit of despair, is her friend Maggie getting a swift kick in the cooch.

I have now read two of your stories and both of them were bummers. You take all the slutty sexiness out of the cheating wife scenario and just turn it into the sadness of shattered lives. You suck!

Instead of confronting Tricia and Tim when he catches them screwing, he takes Tricia home and eats Tim's cum out of her pussy, and tells himself that he needs to find out if she is really "unfaithful". So typical of Bob to make sure the husband stays a cuck throughout the story. Highly unsatisfying.

She now works for Sluts R Us

She’s a cheap piece of trash, but an okay mother? I don’t understand men in these stories that have the chance for the children to live with him and don’t take it. Do they want the mom teaching them her disgusting lack of values?

What the hell did Trish part 2 have to do with Trish part 1?

Why were these 2 stories together?

Would any man really ignore the fact his wife is being called multiple times per week by a pussy hound? Would any sane husband have allowed Maggie anywhere near their wife knowing she facilitated the sex at the party?

None that I've ever known would tolerate either of these outrageous assaults on his marriage.

To anonymous: this is the MO of JPB. He builds the suspense of the story on absurdities. As the main hero had plenty of opportunity to stop the affair and wimped out every time the whole sermon in the end is a hollow garbage.

JPB preference for wimps is in a strange addition to his "Van Dame" beatings, occasionally. My guess is that this is how JPB saves himself from being called a cuck and a wimp because most of his stories are about himself being a cuck and a wimp.

This is yet another idiotic nonsense in a long line of idiotic nonsenses JPB posts as stories. My guess is that he has a semi-decent story once in 20 tries on average. He wrote so much garbage it is mindboggling how much time he spent to write that drivel.

What a total wimp dealing with a slut and a womanizer right in front of his eyes. He should have kicked his ass so hard his balls would have ended up buried in her cunt. Total wimp to do nothing. Perfect time to yell tape and make a 911 call that an a-hole is raping his stoned wife - who can’t say no. Then charge the M gal as an accessory. Then sue her and Tim for alienation of affection - and maybe dump the slit whore right then.

Instead, just continue to put up with the crap. Why bother to have recorders if you aren’t going to do anything? The point is what?

Seems the context of the story is way out of wack, but then, It is not our story, is it!

What a wimp,he should have kicked Tim's arse the night he caught them in the store room and slapped her slutty mate who set it up.Also as already said,what as part two got to do with part one.

What a wimp for letting it drag on.He should have kicked Tim's arse when he saw them in the store room and also slapped her slut of a mate who set it up.Also as been said,what as part two got to do with part one?.

That guy has a messed up way of thinking. Good god! It started off good but then the pot amnesia in the store room started the downward slide. Not a likable character among them.

It's like two different stories glued together. In the first part Trisha had a one-off while being stoned and don't remember a thing. She doesn't want to do it again and rebuffs all Tim attempts. She's afraid her hubby will find out.

The second story is about a slut.

The change of character is completely unreliable.

What? He saw Tim fucking her in the stor room. But didn’t butt in - so he could check some things out? Like what? He needed to review his marriage cert to see if there was an expiration date? Maybe he wasn’t married anymore? Dumb dumb dumb part of the story

Rm2712 said it. And aa food you the first story with the black guy kinda raping her it makes even less sense could be good but the complete change from a mistake she didn't remember quite high (more than once... She didn't remember fucking him daily before they married either) to not carrying what her husband thought was at Best jarring.

I read both of these stories, the first one some one else must have finished it because The MC rigged the brakes on the black dudes truck and he went airborne over a cliff. This second part pure bullshit, what husband that is a man would still love a cunt after seeing her fucking a dude at a party.

Just like many other JPB stories along these lines you come away with the conclusion that the guy got what he deserved. Her character was set in college and he knew it, so continuing a relationship with her set his future path. Even a naive eighteen year old isn’t going to take being pissed about, constantly breaking up is an obvious mind game and allowing it to continue just gave her the encouragement she needed.