All Comments on 'Trick or Treat'

I don't think that you're old enough to be here.

More please, need to see where this goes from here

Well the wasn't great...

What kind of story is this you need to continue to make it a true story just gave it a 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good story, although I was a little lost as to the gender of the child; it wasn’t till halfway through I was able to put two in two together. Other than that, I thought it was a good story and would love more about these two. - It is sad people hide behind the name tag “anonymous” and berate authors without giving any constructive criticism. Comments are supposed to inspire not berate the author. Please don’t take these internet trolls to heart.

The story is ok, but a little sophomoric, next time punch it up a bit.

Mehh. That discribes this story pretty well, I'd say.l

Needs improvement. Didn't like the part with the babysitter at all.

Damn what happens now???

Breast =singular. Breasts = plural.

but what about his "candy" please continue

Your writing isn’t bad. But you end without the big pay off time and time again. You could get much higher scores even with a little content. For crying out loud she made it obvious she was down to fuck and then you just stop. Doesn’t make sense. I’ll give you a three but could have been a four or five with more content. ***