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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Get yourself an editor. There's a reason there's rules for writing, it makes reading more enjoyable. You need to have proper quotes around things people say and you need to have a new paragraph when the speaker changes. It looks like a jumbled mess without it.

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Hi guys, just here to have fun. Discovered I was a sissy about 5 years ago and have grown into my role. I love it and this is a place for me to get away and share my fantasies

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