All Comments on 'Tricking My Sister Ch. 02'

I could see one or two more chapters.

Oh, and five stars by the way.

Good to see you are back & that your writing is still extremely compelling!

Wish you good heath and a good life.

You were sorely missed

Very good compelling writting! Love the story

I'm going to have to go back and read the first one!

Thanks for the wrap, DD and take care.

Simple solution for the youngsters. Don’t have kids! Parenthood is highly over rated! Unfortunately one must be a parent to become a grandparent a most enjoyable gig!

Life sucks sometimes! Time to visit the grandkids. 😍

bypass times 6 and a new aortic valve in last 10 yr so I know what a relief it is to feel good again. good story

Congratulations on not being dead. Fun story

I really enjoyed that story! You young kids can really tell a tale! Oh, by the way - it's "tits on a boar hog" and CLOSE also counts in "H-Bombs" ! Yes, I am familiar with Nicky Khrushchev beating a podium. That was about the same time I got woke up by two cops and told to re-target seven missiles in four hours. Yes, those birds were aimed at Central Cuba - from up near Amarillo, TX. Keep up the good work!

Somehow suspected the parents would become a factor.

I figured mom and/or dad was going to come back and catch them. And I was hoping whoever caught them, would join in. And they still can in the next chapter of dad-daughter, mom-son, or all of them together at the same time!

I think Anonymous poster said it best, "Congratulations on not being dead!"

Sorry you had to go through so much crap but I'm glad you're still with us and feeling good. Loved this chapter and hope to see more from you. And reading i realized, after 6 months? I would've fallen for their parents lie too.

Thank you man and love your work

It's great how you bring in their parents to accept their incestuous love. I know you usually only write about sibling sex, but full family sex with all including parents, kids, and siblings is so incredibly erotic and loving. I don't expect you to embrace it, but full family bisexuality is amazing - sex with everyone in the family. Brother and sister together is just the beginning.

It's good to see you writing again!

This chapter was unnecessary

I like incest, I like anal, I like closure. So works for me.

I realize they all have to end but hate when they do. You could have them move away and start in a new country, or city,etc. Just so many ways to extend it. Glad you are feeling better. For goodness sake save that password! Tattoo it on your arm or something. Lol

But this chapter was nowhere as good as the first one. I liked the ending of part 1, the story could have stopped there and it would have been fine. We could have imagine what happens next.

With this chapter, I feel like you just want to give the story an ending. The ways they are caught both times are ridiculous. The first time it's a simple joke that makes their parents crazy for months until they set up an elaborate lie to catch the kids. They could have done the same thing while they are at work.

I'm happy you're back and writing because I love your stories and I need more.

Every word was near perfect. I don't think a well written erotic love story is pointless by the way. That was everything I wanted in a dezurtdawg story. Was a sequel needed, perhaps not but I am glad you wrote it!

Nice sequel

Siblings made love after parents blessings. Pregnant, move out to another part. But don't mess with gangbang or switching.

Ended it perfectly. No need to have dad fuck daughter and mom fuck son. Kids claim they in love and that is how it should be. Thank you for not ruining story like most do.

Will we see anything about a coronavirus lockdown from dezurtdawg? I think a quarantine story mixed with this story and take two pill would make a huge series.

I just loved it so much, WOW !!!

A good ending to the series! Thanks for writing and sharing it!

@Anonymus "Nice Ended it perfectly...." - my thoughts exactly!

It's a great continuation.

Except for the parental revelation. That scene was stolen from another story.

It would have been better to add the 4 DVD sent secretly by the parents a year later. It shows Haley Paige having sex while nine months pregnant. ,😜

I was surprised.

What about an epilogue?

This was great, but not in the class of the first part.

The story didn’t need mom & dad to be related.

Liked it but just a. 4 star rating.

Bill S.

Hahaha - plot twist of the wizardlevel!!

Good Job

Thank you

What an ending! Stories like this make it hard to stop reading this website. Thank you!

Soooooo hot. !!!

Too much of an incest formula. Too many of sibling incest stories end with the parents being siblings also. Getting there was a fun read to lower the rating much.

Bill S.

Wild and crazy, but I loved every word of it. Regardless of the initial intent by the brother, he still had feelings for his sister and she for him. You are such a romantic, which is one of the reasons I love your work. Great writing and editing, I'm glad that you're making your come back with your health and abilities. Writing will help mind and keep you younger. Please take care of yourself, we need you on this page for as long as the good lord will allow. Thanks again for writing it's very much appreciated 😊👍

You dawg you! Loved bith chapters.

Loved them both. I hope life is treating you better, for all the joy you bring to readers — including me — I figure you are owed a lot of good karma.

wow this is so nice, i hope there's another story of incest coming from this writer soon👍

Excellent story and the author is outstanding!

You are an amazing author. This story was totally believable. This sibling's story is on my top 10 list for sure. I wish I could give you 10 stars for this work of art. I'm sorry to hear about your heath and all of the difficulties that you've gone through. I thank God for you and your amazing talents. Please continue to take care of your self.

I am really excited to read more of your works on this site. Again thank you for your talented penmanship. Stay healthy.