All Comments on 'Trip To Self'

Very disjointed, could do with some chapter breaks

This was a great read, romantic, amusing, sexy. There were stark cuts from one scene to another, but I had no trouble following the story.

I'm very pleased to find another talented author to watch for.

Your story was wonderful!! Very sexy! Hot! Romantic! Cute! I loved the characters Chris and Alexis! I loved that Chris had integrity and respect for Alexis and how they both finally came together! Explosive!! Thanks for a great read!!

The story had me rivetted. I liked the way that the sex was not THE story. It's so refreshing to have a plausible and attention-grabbing story line. Some parts I had to read a couple of times as it was not always obvious who was speaking. However, overall I was absolutely impressed. More?

I loved the story seemed like it could really happen. It's if not every girls fantasy it was totally one of my fantasy. I loved the way the story developed and how the sex was not a "wam, bam, thank you Mam" kinda thing. It was real and developed the way it would naturally in that kinda situation.

Please keep up with your awesome writing, and you have made a fan for life with this story.

~ Jessica

This was by far the best story I have ever read on this site. Not only was it undeniably sensual, it also deserves a lot of credit for being able to stand as a story, not just an erotic story. That's not something many people on this site can boast. I could easily see this being made into a movie. And the fact that I felt you were describing my boyfriend didn't exactly hurt.

sexy...very sexy!

A wonderful way to spend time reading this story

Loved it, except for the lack of transitions from one scene to another. Suddenly, things don’t make sense, then I realize it’s a new scene, then I have to go back to reread where the new scene starts. Annoying. Otherwise, great story.

I was a rider; and took a similar trip back in the day. Thanks for bringing back some good memories. My one of my daughters lives in the French Quarter. Next time I visit, I will be sure to take in an amateur night. Thanks for a great read.