by Firefly_Writing
Building up nicely. Charlotte's indecision about whether to take the plunge or not is quite a tease. I'm sure she will! Looking forward to the next installment.
I do enjoy your writing but is there any eroticism or sex in the? My preference would be that before James washes and grooms Sky he bends her over and fucks her hard!!!!
@jaydean409
It's not that I can't write smut. Nor that I'm opposed to it. But I try to showcase the opposite side of things in these stories as BDSM as a whole isn't about the sex. Sex is part of it, yes. But to me, the more enjoyable and fun things to explore in writing for me anyways, are the emotional and deep running trust sides of things. The states of mind. All the other juicy things, aren't y'know...physically juicy. I typically don't write the sexier scenes. Although it does happen occasionally.
Nice continuation. So there are consensual full time ponies. Sounds interesting. Please continue.