by DocWords
keep it going but keep it in the family. dont bring in outsiders please.
Don't try this at home, readers. A baseball bat to the head is almost always fatal. And the son had a shotgun available to him so why wouldn't he have just threatened the man with that in the first place? And what will keep that man away? Getting a beating didn't keep the son from retaliating; why would it deter the man? I liked the premise of the story, but it's not in the sci-fi category so normal physics and psychology should be respected.
Enjoyed the revenge. I would have liked Dean to drop but one drop of acid on Wayne's dick to emphasize his determination.
5*
BJ
I love mother/son incest. But this story was putrid. It was completely implausible. Iunderstand you need to find new subject mstter, but I couldn't even finish this. I can't even rate this. So no ropes of cum out of 5
Wayne got off too lightly. Will probably come back. Needed something to remember the experience by - like maybe some broken knees.