All Comments on 'Triplet Play Ch. 01 - Mom's Guest'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Good story line

dikupinyadikupinyaover 3 years ago
sweet

keep it going but keep it in the family. dont bring in outsiders please.

redpoppiesredpoppiesover 3 years ago

Don't try this at home, readers. A baseball bat to the head is almost always fatal. And the son had a shotgun available to him so why wouldn't he have just threatened the man with that in the first place? And what will keep that man away? Getting a beating didn't keep the son from retaliating; why would it deter the man? I liked the premise of the story, but it's not in the sci-fi category so normal physics and psychology should be respected.

cursrahcursrahalmost 3 years ago

more of this story please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Write more of this it needs it

DAWG8265DAWG8265over 2 years ago

More family time. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Enjoyed the revenge. I would have liked Dean to drop but one drop of acid on Wayne's dick to emphasize his determination.

5*

BJ

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

2 b continued please

HungryPapaBearHungryPapaBear7 months ago

I love mother/son incest. But this story was putrid. It was completely implausible. Iunderstand you need to find new subject mstter, but I couldn't even finish this. I can't even rate this. So no ropes of cum out of 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Wayne got off too lightly. Will probably come back. Needed something to remember the experience by - like maybe some broken knees.

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