All Comments on 'Trivial Pursuits Ch. 10'

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jetpacksamjetpacksamabout 9 years ago
You Horrible, Horrible Person

Write Faster :)

meh4912meh4912about 9 years ago
Love it!

2 chapters in 2 days....heaven!!!

Can't wait to read on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Thrilling

It's getting better all the time!

DoctimeDoctimeabout 9 years ago

Thanks for the quick submission. Here's to another quick submission inside the limo!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
dont write faster

The suspense and the buildup is killing me and i am loving each moment of it

The wait allows my imagination to run wild and that is an equal fun as reading your next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Killing

To paraphrase Achmed - The Dead Terrorist 'Stop killing meeee...'

WhatdidJanetdoWhatdidJanetdoabout 9 years ago

More please. Loving it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wonderful story

Not normally my type of story, but I'm certainly enjoying it, and have joined the crowd who eagerly check every day in hope of finding the next chapter. When it arrives the first thing on the agenda is to scroll down, cross my fingers, and see how many pages there are, always hoping for 10 to 15. Yes, I know, that is unrealistic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Love it!

More more more.... Please :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Who was late to work this morning?

...Me. Because I couldn't stop reading. Try explaining that to your Boss.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
brilliant!!

Absolutely brilliant!

elleayeareelleayeareabout 9 years ago
Boalt

No one would ever question or look down on an associate who attended Boalt. Unless that woman attended Stanford.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
The dad

If and when Denny meets the father, he should be pulled aside for the cliched if you hurt her speech and interrupt with something to the effect of " I couldn't compete with the damage you've done."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
The Truth

Telling the truth is truly empowering. I love how Denny is gradually evolving from guilty and uncertain to confident and determined.

I love your your writing style and I bought Possess Me even if I read it at least 3 times here at Lit.

ambush184ambush184almost 9 years ago
so far so good

I actually like the no sex so far. To be honest, it would spoil a really good story. I'm looking forward to it though

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Twist

Wow. Great author. I'm now wondering where this twist will take us!

pure12pure12almost 3 years ago

I don't like the characters, they are either week or as in the case of the leading man, a sexual predator.

could do with a re-write.

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