by titania123
I don't like the characters, they are either week or as in the case of the leading man, a sexual predator.
could do with a re-write.
I actually like the no sex so far. To be honest, it would spoil a really good story. I'm looking forward to it though
Telling the truth is truly empowering. I love how Denny is gradually evolving from guilty and uncertain to confident and determined.
I love your your writing style and I bought Possess Me even if I read it at least 3 times here at Lit.
If and when Denny meets the father, he should be pulled aside for the cliched if you hurt her speech and interrupt with something to the effect of " I couldn't compete with the damage you've done."
No one would ever question or look down on an associate who attended Boalt. Unless that woman attended Stanford.
...Me. Because I couldn't stop reading. Try explaining that to your Boss.
Not normally my type of story, but I'm certainly enjoying it, and have joined the crowd who eagerly check every day in hope of finding the next chapter. When it arrives the first thing on the agenda is to scroll down, cross my fingers, and see how many pages there are, always hoping for 10 to 15. Yes, I know, that is unrealistic.
The suspense and the buildup is killing me and i am loving each moment of it
The wait allows my imagination to run wild and that is an equal fun as reading your next chapter
Thanks for the quick submission. Here's to another quick submission inside the limo!!!