by Goldeniangel
Every good story need a good prelude to start with and you have done a wonderfull job here.
Every good story need a good prelude to start with and you have done a wonderfull job here.
You set up the story well. Even though there was no sex in this one, it was better that way. Should be a great series. One thing "be come" is one word noy 2. Keep writing!
Looking forward to seeing what else happens with the ill fated concubine.