All Comments on 'Trophies Ch. 03'

It’s getting to the point that you can’t tell the players without a scorecard. While it would make things a pain in the ass if you were actually involved but as for reading the story, it works well. Ed better hope that he gets some of that tech to erase some memories or his basement is going to fill up really fast. Since this takes place in the Uk I M guessing and I am unfamiliar with the laws there, I don’t know if they require warrants like the USA is “supposed to have one” before entering a home unless there is actual real probable cause such as screaming inside or a gunshot so I have no clue if Detective Peele has a case that would hold up in court.

I for one LOVE your writing and can't wait for another chapter from ANY story. Great work