All Comments on 'Trophy Wife Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fantastic Visuals

The writing was fantastic i felt like i was right there participating in this highly erotic dinner. Keep up the good work i intend to read more from you!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
amazing

your story was amazing. I was so dissapointed when i found out that there were not two more pages waiting like the first one :( too hot! more please!

Scorpio44aScorpio44aover 15 years ago
Too short!

The writing was quite good. The action, wonderful! And suddenly, you stopped! I guess I should have expected it. You ended Ch.1 the same abrupt way.

I don't like it! The score was for the quality of the writing & story. It could have been a 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great and half assed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You dumb ass finish the damn story. You write a wonderful story,and then forget to finish. What a dip shit!!!

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