All Comments on 'Tropical Accident'

I wonder if they stay together eventually and even make more babies. I think they are falling in love despite the way it all started.

stopped reading when you describe a 9 inch cock as wide as a coke can as "not a monster cock, but respectable". you fucking idiot, that's longer and thicker than 95% of the guys in porn.

Shrink the cock or make the guy know he has a monster, males know cock sizes better than women. If you had a nine inch cock that was eight inches around like a coke can you would know its not small. Also learn more about vaginas, hitting the cervix is normally not a turn on. Honestly anal is about the only way nine inches will get warm.

Not a bad story but lots of spelling errors... And I think you need to proofread it next time so you can cut down on the grammar errors. Good effort and I did enjoy your story.

lots of errors, pregnant? 9" coke sized dick? good tease, and the sex, ignoring the elephant in the room, was good

perhaps study anatomy before your next bs story. its not even fantasy!

waste of time.

No virgin is taking that big of a cock and not be screaming her head off. Not to mention the time it would take to get it in without serious injury

Enjoyed this, had a nice wank while reading and shot a nice load of cum, good wanking story.

I don't care about the dicks size as others do because there are dicks that size and larger; just saw one this morning on a porn site.

Anyway my issue is the ending. It came off as you just stopped typing not ending just stopped typing and forgot to add more to it.

dumb story

I have fucked many women who have been on drugs and dumped my load into their fertile pussy and gave them a baby. Hopefully they have daughters so they can grow up as drug sluts like their mother and they can get a baby fucked into them as well.

I really enjoyed this one. It was a nice change from the “and they loved each other the whole time” schtick. Now I’m just hoping for a sequel, where lust eventually leads to love. After all, it’s not like he can make her more pregnant...

Nussin siskon pillua paljaalla joka yö.

I feel like I've read this before, except that he came inside her at the end anyway and she even scolded him for it...

Did brother and sister continue making love ?

Wish you followed up

You can tell this was written by a dude.

"Femjuice"? Really?

And I don't care how many times you smash your dick into her cervix, it never begins feeling good. Especially for a "virgin".

Is the fact that it was written by a guy supposed to be a bad thing, seems pretty discriminatory and sure everything you said besides "femjuice" is accurate but still, what do you want them to call it, most people have their own nicknames for it

also it was a solid story

Wide as a cock can??? Another author that hasn't a clue about female anatomy.

Didn't have a monster cock but it is 9 inches long and as thick as a cock can get.... so a monster cock then.

You do realise that length is not an issue you can hold back a few inches, girth on the other hand... without birthing contractions it takes practice to take something over a couple of inches.

A little lesson in biology and geometry wouldn't go amiss.

Maybe when you have reached anatomy classes in school come back and rewrite this.

I get fantastical fiction, but it has to keep at least 1 toe in reality.

A dick, especially as thick as they can get will not just slip into a pussy, particularly if it is along her lips when she pushes back.

And then I 1 bombed it and gave up.

Excellent

Learn where a hymen is located Author.

Hitting the cervix is NEVER pleasurable. The hymen isn't inside the vagina, learn some anatomy. A 9" dick is not average and will not just "slip" in. That shit takes conscious manoeuvring and pushing with a 4".