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"Wait!" my mother interrupted, "Taylor, how did you know she wasn't shaved before?"
I opened my mouth to speak, but Claire started first.
"Well Sis, let's just say I was able to sample your boy before you." She smirked.
My mother looked at her sister with that look of bickering siblings. "Well, maybe I'll get even then," Joanne fired back. Jeff was unaware as my mother openly checked out his package.
Eric and Janet walked forward. Eric, still in a shirt but without pants or underwear. Janet, in a bra, and without panties. They looked somewhat ridiculous as Syd pointed out. They quickly shed their last article (as did Sydney) and joined the group.
So there we all stood; Family and friends, involved in acts considered to be the most unwholesome amongst everyday people. We should be shunned. We should be outcasts. We should be locked up miles away from civilization so as not to spread our "perverted infection." But were that to ever happen, it would not stop us now. We had tasted the bittersweet fruit that hooked us so. As we looked around the room at each other, our appetites began to grow once more. Smiles crossed all our lips as lust struck all our eyes. We still had the rest of the week. And up here, everyone else is the outcast.
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Thank you for reading the fourth and final chapter of the Trouble Brewing series. It was my first attempt at writing erotic fiction. And I found it to be quite...entertaining. I would greatly like to hear any feedback from you, the readers. Whether you liked it or hated it. I welcome it all. And please remember to vote.
- COMMENTS
reader_3634almost 8 years agoI was convinced I had spotted a plot twist that never actually happened. When Mindy could not identify the woman fucking Clair's husband and then Joanne was not seen nude until the very end I was convinced that when Mindy saw her nude she would realize who her father's lover was.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI thought this was one of the best written stories I've read on literotica. It could stand the be edited a little more which would add another half star to it's quality. It this was your first attempt at writing, you have a great future in store for yourself.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI've read all of your stories and as your story telling progressed so has your skills. I waited with baited breath for your next story. Congratulation on a job well done.
Horny and waiting for more.
hardheadd1over 8 years agoSome stories you hate to see end and this was one of them. Thank you
DYNO224about 9 years agoI liked your story but I always feel kinda shorted if no one gets knocked up. Of course I like a little romance also preferably both.
