All Comments on 'Trouble in Paradise'

I realized after this one, that these are part of a larger story. However, each story isn't good. Things happen too abruptly and end abruptly. In this story Sarah comes out of nowhere, we find out she was having sex with a relative of his. Then it just ends in sex. Just poor storytelling in my opinion.

Sorry it wasn't to your taste. They're all part of a larger story but they all fit together in some way. This one was meant to show that even after so long, the magic can still be there and they have a future together.

I loved it- Bi Rp

Are u gonna continue these? This is a pretty good series... well done

This series is finished for now. I may revisit it in the future or characters may appear in possible future stories. I'm glad to hear you like the stories I've written. :D