All Comments on 'Trucker's Wife'

by BobBaker

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taylormade1335taylormade1335almost 16 years ago
Real

Your short story about the trucker's wife and neighbor was a slice of reality compared to the other loving wives stories. Just a woman trying to get by.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nope

I don't buy any part of this story. The "set up" for the story line didn't appear until the middle of the text and by then, who cares? Unfortunately, this was formulaic, dull, and boring. There was nothing original in the story line, the characters, the action, or anything else. In short, the story should never have been written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Pure garbage not worth reading

Just another slut wife trying to justify her cheating.This will back fire on her and most likely end up divorced. You know what they say, cheaters never prosper. Cheers Roger.

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969almost 16 years ago
Two wrongs do not make a right!

Having said that, her husband did cheat and was going to continue to cheat. So why not get some for her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
She actually has no evidence that says he is cheat

ing. She has evidence to demand an explanation but obviously has already made her mind up. She now does what any mother would do. Bring a strange man, strange in a sexual manner, into her home with her children there, then intentionally commit adultry. Now if the husband has done his work well, he can prove the wife is committing adultry and has adulterous sex with a man while the children are in the home. One step towards having her declared and unfit mother. Fucking for revenge is and always will be a stupid act. IF for no other reason because of the risk of STDs and diseases. But then stupid people do stupid things, and verys stupid people..... You know the rest.

MsDaienKnightMsDaienKnightalmost 16 years ago
loved it!

oh please the reason why u are all so negative is because ur probably one of the many mindless macho assholes that think its ok to put ur dick where it doesnt belong, it makes u a man right? But its not ok for the woman who sits at home day after day listening to Kids scream, cleaning house and washing ur underwear to ever want more? Grow up assholes we have needs too and if u can't be faithful and make us feel good there is a willing man around the corner who will! You just keep on writing cutie I loved ur story. The reason. They didn't is because now it has them wondering if their little quiet wifey has a hot neighbor of her own!

Oh and if ur going to bash someones writing have the balls to sign ur name to it!

MsDaienKnightMsDaienKnightalmost 16 years ago
loved it!

oh please the reason why u are all so negative is because ur probably one of the many mindless macho assholes that think its ok to put ur dick where it doesnt belong, it makes u a man right? But its not ok for the woman who sits at home day after day listening to Kids scream, cleaning house and washing ur underwear to ever want more? Grow up assholes we have needs too and if u can't be faithful and make us feel good there is a willing man around the corner who will! You just keep on writing cutie I loved ur story. The reason. They didn't is because now it has them wondering if their little quiet wifey has a hot neighbor of her own!

Oh and if ur going to bash someones writing have the balls to sign ur name to it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
NO PROOF, What an Idiot

No proof LOL! Well let’s just leave it to the ladies. How about it girls If you found another woman's panties and bra in your husbands car, Then in the trash and found used condoms, when you never use them. And then when you asked him about it he told you it was none of your business. Wouldn't it strike you as being just a little suspicious. Now this guy is from Australia but the women down under never struck me as being stupid. Unless of course her name really is “Sheila”

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
I liked it. I read just for entertainment and this entertained me.

I would suggest a second part where she tells her husband to take a hike. He has a bad attitude. He could have responded in a much nicer manner so FUCK HIM but not actually. Alimony plus child support then let him screw around all he wants to. I am no goody two shoes but there are much smoother ways to interact with your wife even if you ae fucking around. I believe in treating women correctly, not politically correct but as a human being interacts with another. He will never change so dump his ass, take the house, the kids and the car. He can live in his rig.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
So this is her revenge?

She turns herself into a slut, risking her health and her kids health? What a slut.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
So he's such a skunk

That he doesn't mind slinking into another man's bedroom and screwing his wife while her kids are asleep in the next room? This is the very definition of "asshole". And she's not much better. One can only hope that the husband catches her and leaves her penniless. What a couple of scumbags. Nothing interesting or entertaining about reading this lowbrow garbage.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Dirtballs and whores, everyone in the story.

LoisKnight69LoisKnight69over 2 years ago

@26thNC: When you read a story entitled :Trucker's Wife" and the story info is "A trucker's wife takes her revenge", do you expect a story about chastity and fidelity? Obviously, the wife will have 'get even sex', the trucker will have cheated, and they each cheat with someone so a minimum of four people involved. Duh!

@Anonymous (...he's such a skunk) Yea, he is but no more so than the trucker husband. Actually, he is presented as a considerate good guy. He is friendly and considerate to neighborhood children and he gave the wife a chance to change her mind. He didn't rush to take advantage of her being upset.

It was a good concise story about an angry horny wife, using an available neighbor to get even with her cheating husband. The problem with the story is that there are so many flaws. A couple of examples: She made up her mind to get even when she spoke that night on the phone to her trucker husband. So when did she make arrangements for the porch light with the neighbor? Why go upstairs to the master bedroom next to the kids' room, but then worry about being noisy? Stay downstairs in the living room or another room, go to the basement or use the car in the garage. He left via the backdoor, implying it was more private than the front exit - spread a blanket in the back yard or use a lounger on back patio.

LoisKnight69LoisKnight69over 2 years ago

@26thNC: When you read a story entitled :Trucker's Wife" and the story info is "A trucker's wife takes her revenge", do you expect a story about chastity and fidelity? Obviously, the wife will have 'get even sex', the trucker will have cheated, and they each cheat with someone so a minimum of four people involved. Duh!

@Anonymous (...he's such a skunk) Yea, he is but no more so than the trucker husband. Actually, he is presented as a considerate good guy. He is friendly and considerate to neighborhood children and he gave the wife a chance to change her mind. He didn't rush to take advantage of her being upset.

It was a good concise story about an angry horny wife, using an available neighbor to get even with her cheating husband. The problem with the story is that there are so many flaws. A couple of examples: She made up her mind to get even when she spoke that night on the phone to her trucker husband. So when did she make arrangements for the porch light with the neighbor? Why go upstairs to the master bedroom next to the kids' room, but then worry about being noisy? Stay downstairs in the living room or another room, go to the basement or use the car in the garage. He left via the backdoor, implying it was more private than the front exit - so spread a blanket in the back yard or a lounger on back patio. In short, no reason to need to worry about kids hearing.

BH54BH54almost 2 years ago

It was nice but what next? This woman deserves more than just this.

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