All Comments on 'True Corruption Pt. 03'

by fiveofhearts

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Keep corrupting!

An interesting, absorbing erotic tale that leaves me waiting for the next surprise turn. Far better writing than is usually found on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Absolutely Stunning

It’s an incredibly powerful story, the characters come across as believable, the sex is awesome. I think the world could do with more uninhibited sex.

Thanks so much for sharing this. A very easy 5 ⭐️

Tess (UK)

Ps. One thing came across as odd, over here cider is very definitely alcohol or were you talking about fizzy apple juice?

fiveofheartsfiveofheartsalmost 5 years agoAuthor
You like it hard in the UK? (and other puns)

Tess - thanks for your encouraging notes! Here in the land of the Puritans cider is non-alcoholic unless specifically denoted as "hard cider." And you're right, I was referencing "fizzy apple juice" in the story: here that's called "sparkling cider."

I'd toss it all in the ocean for a dry cider from the West Country.

[ripe fruit/juicy sex puns here - play along and choose your own!]

Thanks again for reading!

5<3

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