by fiveofhearts
An interesting, absorbing erotic tale that leaves me waiting for the next surprise turn. Far better writing than is usually found on this site.
It’s an incredibly powerful story, the characters come across as believable, the sex is awesome. I think the world could do with more uninhibited sex.
Thanks so much for sharing this. A very easy 5 ⭐️
Tess (UK)
Ps. One thing came across as odd, over here cider is very definitely alcohol or were you talking about fizzy apple juice?
Tess - thanks for your encouraging notes! Here in the land of the Puritans cider is non-alcoholic unless specifically denoted as "hard cider." And you're right, I was referencing "fizzy apple juice" in the story: here that's called "sparkling cider."
I'd toss it all in the ocean for a dry cider from the West Country.
[ripe fruit/juicy sex puns here - play along and choose your own!]
Thanks again for reading!
5<3