All Comments on 'True Heart's Desire'

...when you needed him? He would quickly have sorted out the villains and then returned to Fiona leaving our heroines in the land of happy ever after. Still, that wouldn't have left you much to write about so it's as well the Jolly Green Ogre was elsewhere. This is a delightful fantasy and one I'll probably return to in the future. Five stars (that should please the Moon Goddess).

Erotically delightful. Wonderful imagination.

Enchanting!!

What a delightful "Fairy Tale🎉", being so artfully detailed by the author. This was quite a refreshing new storyline, which I enjoyed immensely! We all often need to occasionally enjoy a "delightfully sexual fantasy", helping to brighten our daily lives from such depressingly mundane issues as COVID-19.

Definitely 5*-Star Rated To The Author / Love Goddess!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved this story. Don't normally like fantasy worlds but even though it was slightly predictable, it was absolutely enjoyable to read. Defo 5 stars.

Lovely mythical tale of good overcumming evil.....

Thoroughly enjoyed hearing about Sienna and Enya and how their love triumphed over the evil Allister. Splendid read

If there is a next chapter ( and I hope there is)- make it about the daughters coming of age and sleeping with each other and swapping mothers..

That was a very sweet story. You have a nicely imagined world. I hope you will write more stories in it.

A beautiful tale. I loved it!

Oh my. This is so well written! I can only hope that it continues! Thank you.

It was a nice story but I'm still curious as to where the babies came from

I really appreciate all who have read, loved and commented on my story. I was a little nervous about publishing this one because it's not my usual story arc. Just in case anyone was wondering, I was inspired to write this after watching the Heath Ledger movie "A Knight's Tale". That and my love for Disney princesses. To address a few comments:

Will there be more stories in this world? I'd like to think so. I already have an idea about a questing knight and a dragon.

It seemed predictable. True. But, as I said, this is a fairy tale. Certain beats have to be hit: Love at first sight, damsel in distress, good triumphing over evil, etc.

How did the queens become pregnant? With the magical Ivory Rod of Life. Essentially a double headed dildo which was enchanted by priestesses of the goddess of the moon, goddess of love and priests of the god of life, god of joy. It is a potent artifact that basically is divine artificial insemination.

With love, Bree

What a wonderful story and a great addition to your canon. Love it. xx

Hallo Bree!

Jackie and I hope you interred "True Heart's Desire" in the literotica holiday story contest!... This is what we call a Lesbian Holiday Story,,, yes!

Thank-you it's beautiful... 5-Stars and 5-teary-eyed Orgasms!

Gay Kat.

Wonderfully written, highly erotic romance; love your imagination and storytelling. Whether we enjoy Sienna and Enya in the future or not, do trust that you continue to share your stories with us. Thanks.

Just for pages but this was wonderful enchanting entertainment ....... You truly jave developed a ART OF WRITING which is wonderful ....... This is an extraordinary tale filled with happenings, acting, great detailed scenes and quite addictive for more

Beautiful written, powerfully erotic, deeply romantic and driven by a sense of the overwhelming nature of true love. I loved this story beyond words.