All Comments on 'Trust'

Really well developed and told. I was leaning four stars, but the ending kicked it up to five.

JPB NOT BOB

The premise of the story was that Annie developed a seizure disorder some 5 years before the first portion of the story took place. The seizure disorder somehow caused her to initiate sex with Bill. Her infidelity was so unacceptable to her baseline personality that it created and "walled off" an alter ego, here a malevolent entity, that assumed responsibility for conducting the affair. The seizure disorder killed her before she could receive effective treatment.

The author can, of course, do whatever he/she chooses with fictional characters. Nonetheless, it seems important to note that this story is not at all consistent with the typical course of a seizure disorder in reality. In normal time and space, Annie's behaviors would be more likely to be the result of a curse mediated through a Voodoo doll than be caused by a seizure disorder.

Eek...should have been happy she died!

Well told, 5🗯🗯🗯🗯🗯. The MC was more understanding than I thought possible. I'm not sure if I could be that understanding. The Irish temper blows first, white hot. Then the Scandinavian temper takes control, the cold of the depths of space. More and more the cold temper is in charge, and that terrifies me as nothing ever has.

A story well told. The author wisely had the MC get counseling after a horrible double whammy.

Shoprat had a good comment, but because the medical workup was incomplete, it seems unfair to say: Annie caused her own mental issues that led to her death.

I really wish you were still writing. This was an excellent piece. Don't understand many of these comments. It was clear that Annie caused her own mental issues that led to her death. She made a huge mistake and paid for it and she understood at the end what she did. Hub understood all of this and loved her but he would not have necessarily ever trusted her again or gotten back with her. Great story.

Six Month's after Carol and Bill divorced...One of Bill's para-mores had contracted the two V.D's from Bill and in a fit of rage used a shotgun on Bill...

KMN!

"When will it stop? When?" For some of us, depending on where we are in life, it will never stop. It may lessen in frequency and severity, but it will always be there...

A good one to read again. In a real world, Bill would not have survived Anne by long.

you must of have suffered this type of pain and lose. I have cried for no apparent reason and felt this pain for seven year for the loss of my son. I commend you for this story of love and true loss.

Annie was a slut who designed her own deserved death. Carl was a wimpy cuck. Bill made out the best. Carol is a strong person, too good for Carl.

Was it a medical problem or a psychiatric one? Autopsy, or did no one care? And if purely mental, fatal seizures? Hmm.

A decade old story that is a heart-breaker. Well written and it brings information that can be a great benefit. If noting else you will want to have regular medical check-ups and be more aware of dangerous symptoms.

Literotica contains some very good information about many facets of life.

It should not be forgotten that it was her affair that started her mental health issues. There then is a reasonable chance that had she not had the affair she would not have got her mental health issues and thus would be alive. If that is the case, she killed herself.

With a lame ending

Two words: KILL BILL!! Carl was a wuss at the end. No punishment for Bill at all. Almost as bad as a wimp/cuck/voyeur story

A nice, though extremely sad, story.

I think that Carl should take comfort in the act that it was a medical condition that created "Evil Annie". And she, not the 'rea;' Annie, betrayed him.

Thank-you for the good read.

Pasqual

Great story, superbly written and edited. I have to admit, however, I don’t like people dying in a story and you feature that in several stories.

well done

This story hits home for me. It almost like what happened to me. In the end, I was living back in So. Cali. And she was in Tenn., We talked almost everyday. She was living with an asshole and wanted to come back home to me. She would enter rehab. ( she had a pill problem) then come live with me again. But before she could come she died in the hospital, heart failure thru pancreas cancer. I had talked to her that night and got a call 3 hours later that she had passed. It was hard so I know what this story is about... Recovery and forgiveness. 5 big stars and a lot of tears, thank you.

It's rare that a cheating spouse story turns into one of love, compassion and forgiveness. You accomplished it in a very believable way. That's an excellent, if sad, story. I suppose it would be interesting to know why she started the affair, before the personalities split, but people do fail themselves and others. Good job.

“Come on, do people really think the pain will last in that quantity and quality forever?”

Take this from someone who’s life has been an absolute bloody nightmare, since his wife passed away 18 months ago, the pain of losing a partner can and does come in that quality and quantity, long after the event. Some people never come to terms with the loss and can never move forward with their lives.

When you cut Bill's still beating evil heart from his chest, and show it to him as he begins his trip to Hell!

Didn't see the split personality coming, but guess it made sense. Her death was a.good out for your story. Hope he was able to make Bill pay.

You fucked around and it caused you go insane. And shortly there after it kilted you. Oooohhh poor Annie, if you had only known what would happen. Let’s celebrate her memory. Yeaaaaa, hip hip hoorahhhhh. Three cheers for the cheating slut. Come on let’s all here it for the pathetic cunt.

How about a little farewell toast to Annie.

You caused your demise on your own,

You continued as you used the phone,

Who knew that it wouldn’t end well,

But a plus is you rotting in hell.

Good riddance you disease ridden cunt.

How was it that her bad side came out at exactly the same time everyday and only when talking to her lover? All this time she never went into one of her fits with him in the room? It just doesn't compute.

Still it was a decent effort so I gave it 4 stars.

Carol is his answer?...Definitely a Tears and Tissues Tale (RYMES ).... I wish I could say that I enjoyed the story 100%?....But I Can't as it has segments that relate to my Marriage!......But I Will Say That I Endorse Your Story! ...★★★★★ WOOF!

LOL. And true. Wish you were still writing. Not many writers like you left.

A nice twist with the illness. It was irresponsible of Carl, once he knew about the severity of her headaches, not to Immediately rush her to the hospital for testing. I don't know if it would have saved her in time but I don't think anyone else does either. Of course this is all fiction and none of these people exist so...

I would find a death of a spouse better than cheating and a divorce, but that is the way I am built.

Cuckold ideas as Matt M, life must be really hard for a cuckold

Well, someone should tell Carl or whatever his name is to give it a few years, and he doesn't even need to do anything about it. Someone should tell the author to soften statements from inevitable reality to current feelings. Come on, do people really think the pain will last in that quantity and quality forever? You can't make me believe he's never had a paper cut before and doesn't realize that physical and emotional healing are somewhat similar. Trying that shit makes it seem like you're putting a certain fetishist slant on things, which will get whoops and hollars from many, but an opposite reaction from actual people.

Very good work

Totally weird...how did i miss this one? It's an interesting twist. A medical issue, through and thru. Is anyone strong enough to actually differentiate between two different personalities? And let the 'evil' one go? It would be tough.

5*

Please get treatment Anon, you seriously need it:

"1* another illiterate WHORE posting cuck shit."

another illiterate WHORE posting cuck shit.

Katmai has a wonderful and deft turn of phrase. He is able to grip the imagination and the emotion, though occasionally, to get there, he goes a bit far.

His grammar and prose is deft and of good quality. Certainly better than average on a fan fic site.

His flaw, if there is one, is that of plotting and characterization. Here, he gave us essentially a scene. No sense of closure and a bit of a downer. Wife gets sick and dies crazy.

In Nice Guy, he violated the honesty of the character of the main character with no transition.

He COULD have gotten to a reconciliation but did not show it.

So with half a page extra, he could be something special

And I would love to read those stories which take that extra effort because he can WRITE.

just absurd. On every level

Wow, FD45 nailed it. Brilliantly said!

I like this story less.

If I were given the facts this person was given, the near genius epiphany of 'serious mental illness' would not jump to mind.

I don't care about 'dos' and 'don'ts'. The FACTS were she had VD, she was consistently running him down, and she showed absolute competence.

But okay. We will use the Suspension of Disbelief card there.

The story took a cheap out. Instead of dealing with the conflict of trying to keep alive 'Good Annie' and get over 'Bad Annie', we got a seamless death. The problem 'went away'.

As a three act play, it should be 'discovery', 'conflict' 'resolution'. All we got in this story was 'discovery' and then CHOP, story over. A Hail Mary pass of giving us something about Bill was attempted, but with Annie dead, who cared? And, um...Carol. Yeah...her husband was fucking SEVEN PEOPLE and she didn't have a clue? Her husband had VD who knew how long...and she didn't show any signs? IIRC, most treatable forms of VD have some pretty nasty symptoms. Like burning urine. Drip Dick. Sores. But the wife was blithely unaware.

That is a second SOD card.

But the breaker of this story was the idea that there exists a widow in Alaska who didn't have a man handy.

The Woman's Motto of Alaska: Where the odds are good, but the goods are odd.

The Male Motto of Alaska: Where you don't lose your GF/Wife. You lose your turn.

Things are different there...

Be happy you got Carol to fuck, the cheating slut is dead and her lover defeated. Or sit aroung sobbing like the 3rd husband of serial cheating wife in Helena Montana exposed on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com

When I say exposed I mean bare breasted and photo of purple rose tttoo next to bush being penetrated. I received those from profile on request

Sad story , no winners for sure.

Nice twist...from a fellow 907

You kinda like the "I was insane or brain damaged, so I cheated" thing.

It's sad, because in real life, untreated BPD people do seem to go for the risky behavior during manic episodes, and it's not an excuse...

A heart wrenching story. Five stars.

Katmai has to be the biggest wimp alive. All your "stories" suck! I hope you die a slow death.

if he hates a story we should all vote a 5 to help the writer. Annony is the biggest asshole on the planet

another divine retributon ending. it's the most stupid way to end a story and it's the second I've read from you. I'm done wasting time with more. 1*

as for your heart, that's the nature of the beast. TK U MLJ LV NV

I am always perplexed as to what the author wants in response from a reader.

Some are looking for an editorial critique to improve their skills as a story teller. My qualifications are more aligned to reviewing the story as an entertaining venue. That said, "TRUST"!

I enjoyed the story, the basic - Wife cheats, gets caught, is punished, husband survives as the victor. I found myself thinking ahead, "she will get caught and normal routine will follow". Damn I love it when the author throws in a twist. I love being taken on a ride outside the norm.

You held my attention, even caused me to pause,, go back a few paragraphs and re-read to ask myself, "what the hell"? Then I read more slowly, my thoughts more in line with story content.

My vision blurred a couple of times as emotions welled to bring tears. Yes, there was the, "burn the bitch".. but on the plane ride to Seattle, the real wife crawled out of her prison long enough to give Carl some inner peace. It was his Annie, not the sick personality created in her brain.

I love that Carl got his payback against Bill. I must have pumped my raised fist and exclaimed with great delight at Bill's fall.

Now.. I am off to read more of Katmai offerings. Looking for that thrill, that same glee I felt with "Trust".

But one thing is certain. The severity was such that she didn't survive the 4 hour flight to Seattle. When it started is almost like the old chicken and egg question. Carvohi has only given us a few bits of information to work with. Really though it doesn't matter, her 5 year long affair with Bill and the compartmentalized sub personality came to be at almost the same time. It would have been helpful to know the findings of the autopsy and medical exam.

Bad Annie paid a heavy price. Bad Bill lives to play another day. Carl is left picking up the pieces.

Katmai,

not Carvohi.

my mistake. I wish there was an edit option After posting.

regret, regret, regret,

as for the anons, GFY

Okay, I've read the story and read some of the comments, but there is something missing. Seizure disorders don't just start due to a compartmentalized personality disorder. As a matter of Neurological study, it is the seizures that start first. And yes, they can drastically change the personality of the person instantly, with complete memory loss or no memory of the seizure event. This can happen with epilepsy, catalepsy, and caspelespy. It can create a hyper aggressive personality in someone who is naturally a pacifist, or a whore out of a nun. It is frightening to witness, especially in someone you love. There is a huge correlation with people who also live with or on the Autistic Spectrum of Disorders. Thankfully they are now realizing that these are true neurological disorders, and not psycho-social disorders. If I was doing a true history of this person, although I know she is a fictional character, I would be willing to bet, she suffered from Absents Seizures throughout her adult life. You know those little senior moments that most people just shrug off. And yes, the extreme change in pressure to the brain during the flight would be enough to cause a catastrophic event where the brain would just shut down. Other than that, you can't do nothing but feel for the main character, even though there was nothing he could do. I know there is no one who could make him believe that he had not been betrayed by his wife, but by the malfunction of his wife's brain.

New and interesting look at an old and tired genre.

Myhands316

Read it again. She was a sick woman. In her sickness came multiple personalities that the husband coined, "good and evil." Doesn't matter that the evil cheated. That made her a cheater and a low-life cunt. It's good that she's not around to endure a divorce. She's probably commit suicide anyway. As for her fuck buddy, he deserved what he got from his wife.

I hate cheaters. All are stupid.

This the second story of yours that I have read where the cheating wife gets killed off and doesn't have to face the fkng mess she created. You have a good story going and then you bring in brain seizures, mexican drug cartels, ghosts, and other wack stuff.

You sure know how to fuck up a good story.

A gay guy in Alaska, don't let the bears get you.

CHECK OUT BIO, WOMEN SAY THEY ARE MEN AND WRITE WIMP CUCKOLD STORIES, WHY?

1 SHE CANT FIND A MAN TO BELIEVE THE BS OF HER LIES

2 ITS A FEMALE, NUFF SAID, FIND A DECENT WOMAN TODAY AND YOU ARE A GOD AMONG MEN, but there are tons of decent men, but so few women want and average man of character.(they want money way more then a good man)

3 a brain BS personality disorder hahaha, you know only a cunt is dumb enough to say this shit let along write it down, and then expect men to read it and say yeah that was nice, BS only my fellow white men are dumb/trained/brain washed enough to fine this romantic, i swear to Christ that the white men of character are being killed off by the truck load, a feminist plot, 9/11..wars..terrorists? its gotta be a woman's dream come true to kill them off in stories or pacify them and in real life wipe out all logical thinking, one race group at a time, dont think so? see any movie or tv show..male is secondary character and if the dad a walking joke, only the blacks and Asians have men in the media that are not pacified or made to look like stooges, yet!

The affair caused the illness, so she violated the vow to forsake all others and broke the marriage first.

Those who say he should have been more forgiving of a sick wife need to read more carefully, the affair came first and caused the sickness.

How much do you "owe" an ex-wife who cheated on you ?

Not in the legal sense but morally and ethically, if your ex-wife is sick are you obligated to care ?

Hiding the affair caused the illness not to be found, which led to her death.

I disagree with the previous commenter. I was hoping she had a brain tumor and would have died later - after much pain and suffering.

Extremely glad the skank died - wish it had been sooner. Bad news is that Bill is alive for a little while longer.

He cried and mourned for the part of their life that was special. His love was a warm and trusting belief in their union so - yes...he cried for that and mourned.

If that is so difficult for some to understand then I think, suggest, some of you may not have had a normal upbringing in a loving family where love, trust and emotional togetherness was what a family unit was all about.

In short, she was his whole world! Do I give her a pass for fucking Bill - Hell No, in fact - I would probably have plans for the SOB!

Thanks for a good read Katmai!!!!!!!!!

Mourning a cheating slut.

to the mentally handicapped. TK U MLJ LV NV

No sympathy here for the slut.

@fanfare

You make no mention of your wife (God rest her soul) cheating on you. If not, she was a good lady, and more power to you. However, IF she did cheat on you, and IF you let her do it, you sir, were and are a cuckold, and she had no respect or love for you.

The "property" comment is out of line. Women aren't property, but using the "caveman" argument about how a woman shouldn't have to be faithful to her husband is also out of line. Marriage vows don't make a woman any man's property. It's up to her whether or not to keep those vows. People are always free to choose. If a husband or wife chooses not to honor his or her vows, that's on them. How the cheated spouse deals with it is also a free choice.

It cuts both ways, too. If a man can't stay faithful, and the wife gets revenge, it's still BTB (Burn The Bastard). There is no excuse for infidelity. Cheating is cheating. My wife and I have a ZT (Zero Tolerance) policy on infidelity. Once a cheater, always a cheater. One strike and you're out. Granted, I'm not as cruel to the cheating sluts in my tales as some BTB authors are, but that doesn't excuse a wife's cheating.

There are very few mitigating circumstances to even consider a reconciliation. Being drugged by the Asshole, or dealing with past trauma (WITH therapy before the reconciliation) are the only ones, as far as I'm concerned. This tale wasn't one of them. Wifey knowingly and willfully entered into an affair with a married man BEFORE SHE GOT ILL. Both of them were wrong, but neither of them cared. That, my friend, is called Lack of Love and Respect.

I gave this tale 5 Stars.

And to the anon fuckwit who thinks it ok to post some dick wad statement about someone's real life without showing who you are one can only assume Fanfares comments run true for you.

This is supposed to be a fun place to be. Not a place for cowards to attack others

GB NZ

The fact that you willingly accepted to be a cuckold for 25 years doesn't mean everybody else should do it.

My marriage was twenty years of heaven , then five years of hell. My wife was a physically and mentally strong woman until a series of heart attacks and micro-strokes afflicted her. I downjobbed just to be able to work close to home and to be there at home for her during my lunchbreak.

She had given me twenty wonderful years and once she started to deteriorate, I spent my time trying my best to repay her. "In sickness as in health". I have had received comments about my unwavering hostility towards the BTB mob that infests this site. My reply is, I have utter contempt for the cowardice of the anonymousies towards the women in their lives and the cruel treatment they advocate for any female property that does not accept the status of property.

Their infantile tantrums over fictional characters. I guess these stories are too close to home for many of these narcissists. Who are stupid enough to believe their mommies when they lied to these perpetual boys, that their little wee-wee's are the center of the universe. You are foresworn oathbreakers.

She was a cheating cunt wife with headaches. The tumor came after her affair started. Since she died (yay) no divorce needed and the husband gets everything. A happy ending, yes?

The sad reality is that she, with no mental problems, had an affair at least five years ago. So much for the years of wedded bliss. Each time she went to visit Judy, she fucked good old hung Bill. Where was her love and devotion to her husband?

Now, dying and in her regular, Annie state, she apologizes and dies...well, sad - the poor guy loved her with his whole being.

Honest for many years was/is bliss and happiness but in the end, willfully cheating is a destroyer of love and trust, hurt of the unimaginative level. When did it really start, Bill and Carol helped her survive her first husband, his adultery and divorce? How was Bill supportive then...hmmm, maybe a little extra warm hug and a big dick?

Anyway, very good and well written story. I believe he was a happy man for years but now, if he realizes her cheating was originally with no remorse or concern for her marriage, he may be able to move on and realize that he did have a great wife for years and even without a divorce, he didn't have a wife for the end years, just a cheat who kept him company...that might help.

Thanks, good story and a bit tearful.

According to the newest results of psychiatrics and sexologist the nymphomania IS NOT ILLNESS!!!!!!!!! So the wedding wov does not regard to nymphomania!!!!!!!!!!!! (in poor, illness etc..)

There was a documentary about a woman who had a brain injury and became a nymphomaniac. She was married and her husband did his best to deal with her problem. It would make a great loving wives story. It is true, and sad. What would you do? Leave a sick wife, or try to deal with her problem?

http://www.besttopnews.com/relations/sex/27-11-2008/68860-nympho-0/

then she started the affair of her own free will five years ago, she didnt want to stop it and this led to the split personality, so started to be unfaithful and turned up mad, and he was calling her my ann....god i love wimps, how come i never meet one so they can introduce me to their wives.

A heart breaking story. I am not sure how he pieced together his theory about her split personality prior to hearing from the shrink. I was sure this would end with him responding to Bill, "of course she likes big cock, why do you think she married me asshole? I've got at least two inches on your shrimpy cock!" Hearing her tell Bill about her husbands small penis would have been a big tip off that something wasn't right with her.

in part to get the bad taste out of my mouth from reading Ch. 03 of "Erasing Julie." It's a great short story. It left me wanting more: more information, more clarification, more satisfactory resolution, but most of all more opportunity for the two main characters to heal together (physically and emotionally). I happily suspended disbelief and accepted the facts as given. Then, I enjoyed the ride. It left me sad for the characters, it was a tragedy. I actually really enjoyed the husband's approach, and the obvious love he had for his wife. The story's pace was excellent, and it read like a mini-mystery. I enjoyed the creativity of the storyline, and the use of dialogue was excellent. The emotional impact of the story was gut-wrenching. The author is obviously very talented, and can execute an excellent story when he wants to. I just get the feeling that, in multi-chapter stories, he either gets bored with the storyline or wants so much to shock (or anger) the readership that he goes off in wild directions. His perogative. I've learned to enjoy those stories (or parts of stories) that work for me, and try to forget about the ones that don't. 5 stars all the way.

come on dude, what illness did she have. Slutotosis, no she had cockslutitst. If she was so crazy, lock her ass up and get her some help. But she was fine till she got caught and the rest was just good timing.......LOL

What was it - full autopsy should have found something - don't leave us hanging - we have no clue as to whether or not there was an adequate explanation for her strange behavior - or not - it is important to his future therefore the storyline??

are like Annie.....pain shows us we are alive tk u mlj lv nv

....very good story not quite fleshed out enough but not over the top either. Most authors on this site would be in Ray Bradbury land with this plot in their grasp.

yes perfect. the cunt died. no lawyers, no fight over who owns what, and he gets any insurance and a new pussy will take care of the loss. and the whore was not "his" anymore - she was just a whore, another dean cheting cunt. it is a win win.

i would have preferred revenge in a better way. Her death was sad.

so what caused the brain spasms? annie's lover driving her head into the headboard?

stays a long time sans assistance. TK U MLJ LV NV

Carl suffered because of Annie's beyrayal and illness. Bill was a first class prick and should die of aids in agonizing pain. Not much else to say. I'm glad this is fiction.

Real life hurts too much.

huecuck, the resident expert on getting cucked hard, recommends Anal Eze to make those particularly savage cuckings a tad bit easier to handle.

The story invokes a physical cerebral phenomenon (seizures) AND a psychological problem (multiple personality)! Although psych problems may all be mapped to a neurological cause, that has not yet been done for MultPers! It is not impossible that her seizures could bring out an alternate personality, it is much less likely that the movement between her two personalities is triggering seizures. The story suggests her first tryst was as Good Annie, after which she created Evil Annie to protect herself. I am not sure where the seizures play in that scenario!

If, instead, Bill got lucky because of a personality compromise due to a seizure ... well they are reported as infrequent and weak in the early stages!

Annie's death is VERY CLOSE to deus ex machina, convenient to leave issues in high tension!

she was a slut and the husbands a pussy.

What else will the author think of next as an excuse? the husbands in his stories are spineless ( nevermind old). UNREALISTIC!

I have had the pleasure of reading everything this author has posted. He has great skill at telling a story and seems to be getting better with time. If you haven't read "Nice Guy", you should. I wasn't a big fan of the closing, but that seems to be a common problem with stories posted on sites like this. I hope he keeps posting and I will keep reading.

A well put together story, only minor point that I would disagree with is that Evil Annie didn't seem to be present for the phone calls she made to Bill so she must have been aware of the affair, either that or Evil Annie turned on when she talked to Bill. Who knows what can happen with the brain, Anyone who has ever undergone counselling is certainly aware that in many cases they have buried things that distress them and can cause problems when they surface. Any partner of someone suffering with PTSD can tell of personality changes that can cause different conduct that can be harmful. Other than the little point of the phone calls, a different story, much more enjoyable that the glut of cuck stories that we have had to endure ovet the last while.

Let's face it, therapists are not very bright and quite easy to fool. Using mental illness as a plot device is pretty weak, even if it's a physical issue

thinking about the story after it ended left me unsatisfied. The explanation of her death wasn't there in a way that actually explained why she died. The story did flow well and was easy to read.

Even most quacks who call themselves psychologists agree there is no such thing as D.I.D. It's a made up disease that made a good/popular movie.

But then again, this is a work of fiction, so you can have whatever you want. Most of the comments here were discussing whether this wife "suffered" from this disease or not, but really, she did not, since it is a made up disease. She really IS a slut.

Well written and a very good storyline.

Sad outcome, but perhaps better than if she would have lived. It would have taken a really big man to get over those phone conversations that he heard, and what she said about him.

Thanks for the read.

Thought the psych profile is off.People do compartmentalize and can do bad things when in "compartment" space but the fact is it doesn't cause split personality.In effect it is getting caught up in the moment in a sense. but it isn't a split and the "good" annie is present and aware what bad annie did but could't stop

Ultimately hubby believed that annie,his annie,had cheated on him.If he believed she was a split,not knowing what she was doing,he wouldn't have trust issues.Good annie cheated with scuzzball and that was enough.It is also unlikely seizures like that could come from psychological causes especially death.

To figure out that Annie had a split personality from what he heard was a longshot. She simply was acting acting like a typical two-faced bitch. She may have wanted a way to keep the peace with her husband, and became used to acting that way. It was hard for me to believe that even a compationate man could come up with a split personality diagnosis. The actions at the clinic were black and white, and I also would never believe that personalities could be that compartmentalized.

That said, you did a good job of portraying a loving husband, who was searching for a reason to still love his wife. That type of personality does not sit well with many of the 'Loving Wives" readership, who want to be shocked at what the bitch did to her husband, and then revel in the revenge taken on her and her lover(s). Please keep writing. Thank You.

I've only heard of "multiple personality" being referred to as "dissociative personality disorder" in psycho-medical circles and always with regard to childhood trauma not some adult events or afflictions. That part just didn't ring true. That being said the story was well written and followed a clear and logical flow. Liked it overall 4*