All Comments on 'Trust but Verify'

cucks get one star

First story!

3

Nah don't bother writing a sequel

Where the fuck did you pop in now? With cosplay and all that shit?

Strange, interesting. Don't know how I feel about your story.

good setting, but only 4* because of the crossdressing fetish and gay stuff. That are things that I don't care for.

WTF?

Not sure if that was what Ronald Reagan had in mind when he came up with the phrase that Ash used as a motto, but he was the head of the Screen Actors Guild. When you head the actors union in Hollywood, things would have to be a lot kinkier than bisexual threesomes in order to shock you.

Hmmm, not a very good start. In fact, I'd say it was a horrible start. Cuck stories are not as well received as first time writers think, they're abhorred more than liked. Except for odiouser, he's never seen a cuck story he doesn't like. Sorry to see you go this route. Ya know, when you can't even get a score of 3 that means less than half the people who read it liked it. Maybe you should quit.

stupid husband going to keep her cheating ass? Terrible choice, kick her to the curb, she'll just do it again at some point.

ummm... a little confused. it was ok right up until the end where he agreed to get Ashe involved etc etc. Just when we all thought the LW category was making a comeback. Shit like this pops up.

What?

InCase?

A 3 for the subject matter, it was well written.

Not all that great. It's ruined. Don't even bother with this tack....

Drop the cheating cunt. Go for the devorice. No matter the cost. Drop her.

Might wanna stop at just one, you literally cannot sink any lower than this.

No Sequel Needed. Signed: BTW

The whole thing was just too creepy for me. It just serves as an indictment of the morals of higher education these days. And I’m sorry but, “butt stuff”? Ridiculous!

I liked the story. I thought it was a little plain, but it was a good start. More sex and kinky stuff. Make the husband eat his cum from whatever source it was put in. It could be a great turn on. I'm going to follow you for now to see where you go with this.

Stopped in the first sentence...

"You're feedback" - should be "Your feedback"

Because "You're" is a contraction of "you are"...

The tag 'crossplay' - does that mean cross-dressing? Earlier comments seem to indicate that is the case.

You write well but you probably should have put this in the Fetish category. You're not going to fare well in LW.

BS.

Well that's a selfish woman

She must like wimpy motherfuckers. John is as effeminate and gay as Ash. Monica is a slut as in once a slut always a slut. Maybe they die in a car crash and the grandparents can raise the kids in a normal loving environment.

Just slice your pecker off with a steak knife, save us all some time in the future.

who in the fuck thinks like this? Writing wasn't bad, but the story was some kind of fucked up.

2. An interesting concept I'll admit the wife hoping to get her husband to cheat with her lover but how the story went was not all that interesting. The wife was willing to cheat on her husband and for some reason the husband was fine with it. She was a terrible person who seemed to have married an idiot enough to put up with her antics. The revenge was laughable at best and the ending where John was interested in joining with her lover was strange, he had zero anger despite her trying to cheat on him and only not because her lover jumped the gun on trying to seduce him. I'd probably rate this higher if this wasn't labeled revenge.

Even if the husbands into weird gay shit, she lied and tried to manipulate both men. It’s a common trait of women these days but more and more men are saying no to their shit.

The husband, like a lot of LW wives was amazingly forgiving not even slightly annoyed at her manipulations and cheating. She got off without even a cross word - totally unrealistic even for the majority of wimpy Yanks.

As I said the husband being interested in fucking the cross dresser if he was that convincing maybe but wanting to be fucked by one? She never mentioned her husband being gay or bi-curious - maybe the had a talk earlier that wasn’t mentioned or she just thought here husband was a closet gay.

Above all else wrong catagorty / yes, there was a cheating wife but with all the crossdressing and gay shit there’s two obviously better categories or three if you include fetish.

In the end you talk about how they "wouldn't be in this mess". But what mess were they in? You had no consequences for her lying, betrayal and attempt to cheat. It's all a prank on her?

This is my first erotic story in this website

Well you missed the erotic part completely

And shockingly its a cuck story for your "first" time. Almost like theres a very good chance it isn't.

But thanks for sleeping your way through the process of creating a good story.

What. The. Fuck.

How is this entertaining?

don't like the tense

Wrong category. Cuck shit all around. Sick

Shouldn’t it be Cosplay? If he wants revenge, why turn into a gay cuck?

WTF is crossplay? After you answer that, don't bother writing more of this cuck shit.

Not anything we like, consider or would even begin to tolerate.

We think of it as sick folks who are riding along on the trail of destruction until they arrive at the big D….

Why even bother with marriage and have to consider lies and ongoing conniving deceit to constantly satisfy one’s own selfish needs for moments of sexual gratification.

Next time just inform us you enjoy creampies and taking it up the ass....

Needs a part 2 where it is revealed that Ash is actually female. John gets his payback since his wife signs off on what he gets to do.

Oh, ho hum for God's sake.

In your first paragraph someone was hired "lately" instead of recently and it appeared your MC was a feminine guy who at first glance looked like a girl....After reading some of the comment I am glad I stopped reading. Try again?

Don’t quit, the day job. Two stars.

Load of bollocks

plain dumb and only caters to a select few..l know now not to read any of your submissions.

Weird!

Then what is going to happen? ****

This is just stupid!

Ok story - enjoyed the setup and dialogue

2 stars from Xluckylee for a stupid stupid story

Ewewww

I wouldn't want to spend anytime with any of those people.