All Comments on 'Truth or Dare'

So 🔥 thank you

This had a good setup but you skipped the transition stage and went straight to the payoff. You didn't build any sexual tension, which is what makes a story interesting, imo.

It would have been much hotter if the game had developed at a believable pace, then the transition could have been somewhat believable.

I hope you take this as constructive criticism and use it to improve your next story.

Especially at the end. Getting mom pregnant was a massive turn on.

Now, please proofread your stories carefully. There are some sentence structure issues, as well as what may be typos, but which are distracting all the same. Have someone read your story before you submit. I read mine til I'm sick of them, and find errors every time. Still I find errors after they're published. Also, a little description of the characters would be useful: age, physical attributes, etc. Otherwise, nicely done.

Great story. Mother's love is the best. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Nice story, that went places I didn’t expect. I spotted a few typos but not enough to distract from the tale.

REALLY LIKED THE STORY. KEEP

YOUR STORIES CUMMING,

HOT and SWEET.

....THANKS....

ps. 5*****

Make more please

Hot stuff, I Never waited for my dad to leave myself. And they are actually still together. Started fucking her in my early teens til I moved out when I was 20. I still fuck her when I come

Visit any time my dad isn’t around..anybody else really do their

Mom? Hit me up. mastevens001 yahoo

The premise was good, but it felt a bit rushed and the flow was not really believable.

.....and there were SO many spelling errors.

You had me until the “impregnate” bs!

Mothers and sons need a way to ease into a taboo relationship without rejection. Truth or Dare as a tool is very ingenious. So many mothers and sons have desires but don't know how to broach the subject.

LOVED this story!!! Five stars and favorited!

Keep this story going

It was hot until the impregnate me crap

Congrats you just made a mutant incest baby

Impregnation is life.

Great story!

Great until getting her pregnant. Why did you find it necessary to go there?

It was a great story, with wonderful premise.

Sadly the cheating ruined it. I swear every guy on this site is a cuck who loves the idea of his wife cheating, and every woman is a skank who fucks anyone whenever they want, regardless of marriage or relationship.

It's a sad sad thing and I pity you all.

Ignore all them haters. That story was fantastic and very hot!!! Loved the impregnation at the end there...

This was really well made. Great job!

I don't know how many Truth or Dare stories I have read, but I know the number is very high. This one is on the top of the list. Best of the best. Thank you very much.

I normally don't like mom son impregnation stories, but it seemed to fit here.It worked. Also this was hot as hell!

truth or dare is fine. mommy got fucked by her son she wanted it and she got what she wanted.!!!

I think when two people love each other....they each want to create a child together. I had an incestuous relationship with my older sister in 1966. Before shipping out to Vietnam she was afraid that I might not come home and she wanted me to impregnate her.

She is no longer with us but the children she gave me are and my beautiful grand babies too.

I liked your writings..l

nice short story.

though the only conflict I see is; you can't be upset about what someone is doing (husband leaving for a younger) when you are a hypocrite yourself (cheating on him for years with multiple men and only stopped 6months before the husband left), that didn't add up in the story for her then to be "sooo upset and feeling down".

nice story in general anyways. 4 Stars

Loved playing truth or dare with older neighbor girls, back in the day. So that made it even hotter for me. "Truth" I don,t usually get physically aroused reading erotic stories, but I got a raging almost painful hard-on reading this one. Constructive criticism aside, I noticed none of them offered to proof read for you? Hit me up, I know how hard it is to catch your own mistake no matter how many times you re-read it. Thanks for sharing your dirty mind!😋

I loved playing truth or dare with the older neighbor girls, back in the day. So That made it even hotter for me. "Truth" I don't usually get physically aroused reading erotic stories. But I have to admit, I got a raging almost painful hard-on reading this story. Constructive criticism aside, I noticed none of them offered to proof read for you? Hit me up, I know how hard it is to catch your own mistakes no matter how many times you re-read it. Thanks for sharing your dirty mind!😋

I loved the story. I really enjoyed the epilogue. They moved on in life as husband and wife. Nicely written. Full of surprises and well-balanced. I gave the story 5 stars! Nice job!

How are you doing well if you can't even spell college?

Other than a few spelling errors great short mon-incest story.

A nice story. AAA+++

Ggreat short story, I hope he can keep her...

LITERALLY hardcore man

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hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

first class, thank you.

great story

mom-son couple

You don't even have a proofreader? The writing's not much, you need some help. And it's 'college', not 'collage'. Please try not to inflict your "stupid" on other people.