All Comments on 'Truth or Dare Ch. 02'

Good but needs to be longer

...Erotic piece. The background is good, but more would help, Tom needs a little more expression, but you are doing well here, I really like how you are explaining what's going on with your own feelings. Thanks for sharing this, and can't wait for more. Cheers! --- Josie

longer chapters please

Again, Rebecca...really well done. I love it.....

I am enjoying this story very much. The picture you are painting is highly erotic, and the atmosphere very charged. My only problem is choosing which character to identify with!

:-) I appreciate the feedback. I am so new to this writing. I will try to write longer chapters and improve my style as best I can. This is one of many fantasies that I have had throughout my life. This story is based upon a guy I fancied some years ago. Fast forward to present day and I now have another man that is the object of my desires. Geography and circumstance have not allowed us to meet as yet however we are in regular contact. Yes, his name is Tom and he is now aware that I have posted these stories. I am glad that many of you can relate to the feelings that I share within this story. "Gurls" isn't it just heavenly to express, celebrate our femininity. :-) Xxxxxxx

Rebecca.

more please.. I definitely identify with Rebecca.. I need a big strong man to make me a woman.. his woman, fully in every way..

you capture the feelings so well, you paint a beautiful picture! keep going! XO,XO,!!!, Jill

Xxxxxx

Thanks for the feedback. Tom and Rebecca will be continuing their voyage of discovery in a couple of days. Xxxxxxx

Rebecca.