by Maedchen88
and time gee from no experience to full slut this would have been better in two short well paced chapters. first introducing peeping neighbour second catching neighbour and ending with an invite
Ignore the moronskies! This is great! When does the neighbor run the lawn mower over her hard nippled titties and bury her face first in an ant hill so the queen can give her mind commands? Then Max will become the true elephant God of old people.
So Bad I didn't even vote or finish reading.
One thing: Are you male? Have you ever tried pissing with a hard on? Almost imposible and more so inside a woman's pussy.
this story is great ! don't listen to those other idiots. its your story so u write how u want !!
Wow...that was actually awful. Appreciate the effort, but it was poorly written, didn't make sense, had no eroticism to it. And dude: pissing isn't the same as squirting. That's the basics.
if it was a 1st story, it was fairly good.. with a bit more polish, an some research, can be better...
Awesome story!!!!! I would love to be part of that gangbang. I would help Max lick her clean.