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Click here"Fuck that was good!"
I jumped to Emily's face and lapped up every drop of cum gulping it down. God that tasted good.
We all just lay in the bed catching our breath, cuddling, thinking about the best game night ever.
"Hey Mum, Dad won't be back for another two days, will we be able to play tomorrow?"
"Maybe, but right now I think it's best if everyone just gets some sleep."
We all fell asleep almost instantly. sex can be really exhausting.
- COMMENTS
ChristopherAllanover 4 years agoI liked your story. Unlike the guy who thought Si was short for sis instead of Simon.
Perhaps he has trouble with basic comprehension. You keep writing. I would love a game night like this with my mom and sister. Good fantasy.
Markutedover 4 years agoHere are some pointers as to why i couln't even get to the sexual part:
Writing inconsistencies like the absence of an explanation of who's talking, grammar, spelling, coherence and logic.
Who the hell makes a short word like "sis" even shorter (and dumb) like "si"?
Erotica isn't porn: you have to construct it, not just lay it.
Glad i did not take more time on this.
DomJ69over 4 years agoI liked the premise, but the execution was poor. The premise implied sexual tension, but there was none.
I was taken 'out' of the story with the line: "shoved her tongue in my nose." WTF?
xsiveoneover 4 years agoTongue in nose....balls in pussy? The first is disgusting and I think the second would be painful. Otherwise the story was okay, if a little far out. ***
