by TanyaSilver
Very hot! Well done, I want more... I want to read about him sticking that bad boy up her tight little ass and also what happens after he buys her!
The author classified it as non-con and that is what it is. No mention of BDSM.
I think it is well written and a good start to a series.
A simple way to make your writing much stronger.is to make sure you stay in the same tense. Don't see "feels" one sentence and "felt" the next. It's jarring.