by kelmag
I lived in San diego for 5 years (but that was some time ago-before the internet)...never had anything like that..."Kelly" is my Hero (and "Tanya" is my fantasy:)
Absolutely superb what a great story I actually felt myself sinking into the part of kelly and tanya was my lover for the day. I dont think I can find the words to express how much I enjoyed reading both parts of this wonderful story. Absolutely excellent.
I enjoyed every paragraph. Some of the very best writing I have come across at this site
Heaps of THANKS for this and the original chapter! I was amazed at the amount of content, and how the writing kept me aching for Mistress Tanya to take it to that next level. I can't help but imagine perhaps Kelly will one day wear that collar for good! :D
I love it. The first story was great and this one just pushes everything over the top. Thank you so much for the story.
Extraordinary ...... Woud have trade his place immediately if offered ....... Perfectly written ...... Ten stars
One great storyline in a long time, well constructed and had the reader on edge. Loved both chapters. Please cum up with a new one. Love them.