All Comments on 'Turkish Delight'

Great story but underwater sex doesn't work well without some non water based lubricant!

Good story. Slow build up, but very sweet.

Voted 5 stars, but it still needs some proofreading: your for you're, what for want, etc.

Thank you Anonymous. I do re-read my writing several times and agree with you as I always find the odd error when I do so. Will try harder in future.

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Great story. I wonder if the young lovers will get together when back home.

This is my first read of your work. I liked it a lot! This is about lovers, and you left the end open for chapter two, very cool!

A bit of a sudden ending. There should have been more follow up with respect to the parents. Otherwise a decent story.