All Comments on 'Turn The Page'

I loved the initial slow pace and build up

ALL CAPS IS NOT EXCITING. IT IS JUST ANNOYING. This isn't 1979. We have upper and lower case, along with punctuation, like exclamation marks. Try to keep up.

I love the mother/son relationships of all the incest genres. I also like it when they fall in love with one another. But speaking as a man if I truly am in love with a beautiful woman the man in me will want to make babies with her. I would have like to have seen the mother pregnant with her son's baby/babies.

Fantastic

One of the better ones I have read in quite some time. Keep it up.

That's the way to do it.

Beautiful slow-burn romance! Loved the neck kissing and the teasing and the tension. Fantastic work!

I like you stories alot blaster but for the love of God thar amount of apologies in this story was too much.

Rather than coming off as sincere it comes off as pathetic.

It be nice if you wrote a character that was confident. Like the whole kissing her neck and fingering thing could have been sexy rather than creepy and pathetic if you just wortr the character with a spine

Anyway 4/5 you're still a great writer

Very good Mom Son romance. Glad they got outta town to live as a married couple. Maybe you'll tell us about Amys love life in the future. Five stars!

Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Very nice story gave it a 4 but you could have them having more sex before she got to be an old woman maybe she could have had some children by him that would have been a better ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ALL CAPS DOES NOT ACTUALLY MAKE THINGS MORE EXCITING. IT JUST SEEMS LIKE YOU WROTE THIS ON AN OLD TIMEX SINCLAIR OR SOMETHING.

Absolutely loved it.

Awesome story but you skipped ahead to soon should have been more love between them with lots more sex, still gave it 5 stars.

Too bad no children from them.

would have been better if Amy was a part of the relationship. I really don't like FOB relationships, so it would have Mark less of a manwhore in my eyes.

You are one of the best Eritrea in here in my opinion. Loved it

A very loving, sweet, yet very erotic story. Well done!