All Comments on 'Turning Bisexual'

Yes. More of these adventures.

You "undeliberately" turned me off. Really poor writing!

I was going to read the threesome story that follows on from this first, but I took your hint in the Author's note & I like to do things in order. Glad I did. You write very well with a good balance of dialogue and descriptive story telling. Sex scenes were very erotic as well. Shame you only mentioned what happened in the final hour or so at Belinda's apartment, rather than describe it in detail; guess I was hungry for more. One small error to look out for next time was that you first described Belinda as having hazel eyes and then when you met up with her again her eyes were ice blue. Unfortunately it made me wonder if the story & Belinda were real (I do like true stories!). Great job overall though & looking forward to reading more of your adventures x

"If you do however which to send me positive critique..."

You are really, really, really a good writer, in some other language.

it was very good love to hear how you two eat pussy