All Comments on 'Turning The Tables'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
too short

i like the plot and idea, but i think it was too short. try delving into the passion and feeling more. nice try though!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
not bad

Could`ve been longer for sure. Loved the part where the cock got shoved into his unprepared hole! Sounds like fun!

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