All Comments on 'Twelve Gates Ch. 01'

Decided wait until I had read the whole 12 Gates.... I loved it !!!!!!!! Please keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your work

Very nice opener. I expect horrible things. Wonderful deliciously horrible things.

And I have an affinity for things grouped in twelves, so that helps. ;)

Certainly drew me in.. can't wait for more.

I'm very anxious to see where this leads!!

please don't make it go dark on us. It is a very good start. Maybe you give us his point of view also.

I liked it a lot, but somehow I get the gut feel this is going to get dark

Interesting scene. It begs for continuation