All Comments on 'Twenty Years Later, It Happened'

It wasn't bad but I felt it lacked any emotion.

Just my opinion.

But nice premise.

Please keep writing more.

No way would he tell her to suck him

He would have just pushed is cock in as deep as it would go and then shot his cum deep up inside her pussy

20 years later stuffed into one page? Ugh.

it was still a great idea and pretty hot. *****

Seems like he finally got to have sex with a woman! Not a virgin any more!

R.

Felt rushed overall. Not a lot of time given to the build up or the act itself. Really good idea about the gap in time between lust and met goal so that's a nice touch. Grammar is also off in places and once you know good grammar you cannot help but be pulled out of a story by it. So a little English Language learning would be helpful for the overall experience; there are plenty of books out there for not much money.

But like I said; good idea.

it needed more of a tease, longer build-up, more about the 2 of them. but the sex scene was great.

Next chapter I hope. Coming in her beautiful cunt and filling her up.it would be great if they lived the rest of their lives as lovers and also siblings. If young enough even having a family of their own

Awesome when I was younger around 14 are used to fuck my 13-year-old sister and she loved it she would get so wet and moan !! That was about 25 years ago and I still think about it when she comes to visit I want to bend her over!!!!

Sometimes serendipity is very powerful. A well written memory that so many wish was their own.