All Comments on 'Twerk, Little Sister Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Hopefully he knocks her up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

You need to continue this story with many more chapters. Dont rush the story. Hoy

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
Good story, but too short

You went to fucking sister too soon. No build-up. Have they had sex before? Have they had any sex before. A little fast to go so quickly to fucking. Still would love to fuck his sister

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Good story, but short

Good story, but short and maybe little fast development.

I hope you write more chapters, more long and developing more the relationship.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Welp, walk in on the bounce

Pants drop and have her flounce

jtw0978jtw0978over 7 years ago
Yep

Please continue this one

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot Story!

I love anal, & I love the lust that siblings can give to each other! I don't normally give 5* tp a single pager, But yours was hot enough to deserve one. Keep up the lusty level or your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Hygiene...

Anal sex right into vaginal sex? Without even a blowjob inbetween?

That sounds like grounds for a quick and not fun infection for her.. She surely didn't prep before this encounter for his cock to go into her ass. Can you edit the story to add SOME WAY for his cock to be cleaned before it repenetrated her vagina?

writerjabwriterjabover 2 years ago

I agree with all the above. It was a HOT story but why was it so easy for siblings to fuck? And switching ass to pussy with no washing is not a good idea.

Despite all this, and having read ahead already, I’m looking forward to learning how this brother continued to fuck his sexy sister :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hot story. But please think about hygiene. Going ass to pussy isn't really smart due to infections.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story, this deserves a chapter 2. How far will it go, will she forsake all her boyfriends now.

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