All Comments on 'TwiLight Ch. 02'

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Andromeda7Andromeda7almost 13 years ago

Yes , very close to the edge. Can't forget the new world order can we ?

hyde2hydehyde2hydealmost 13 years ago
Wow! made me very hot!

Like it a lot! Nice Story! thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow

You need to write more stories like Twilight, it is soooo awesome. I have read it a bunch of times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story but slightly bothered

At the part where it said 'blue eyes met green' bothered me because in the previous story his eyes were hazel not blue

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