All Comments on 'Twilight Time'

Perhaps it's just my schmaltzy mood, but I loved this story so much. What I most want to say is how impressive your writing skills are. In some places you had me howling & laughing out loud. Your phrasing is stunning & at times simply exquisite.

Thank you for this wonderful tale.

T

This was one of the loveliest stories I have read in a long time. I am a bit of a softie when I read stories like this. I don't go got blatant sex stories. This one is one of the best I have read for a long time an ranks either the "Queen & the Solder". Oh BTW I'm male.

....with the previous commentators. This story is a delight to read and skillfully written.

Needed to cum back & read it again. I guess I'm multi orgasmic reading your stories.

An excellent love story. Really wondered about Imogene and why she needed to be the story at all, but you handled that well with the source of the sketches for a wedding present. Your best one yet. 5 well deserved stars.

I really loved reading this story, is goes to prove that true love never die's no matter who it is, you are a very good writer

That there are only 5 stars to give ! Since i've read all your other stories i was always waiting for a new one. Again an excellent job and i'm in great hope for more

Wonderful story! Well written with good character development. story has a nice flow and ties characters together well. Simply said, I really, really liked it and would/ will read it again. Great Job!*****

Being a lesbian does not mean they can't have children. What a weird assumption for 2016.

This stories deserves a standing ovation! Twilight Time is perfect ANY time. It's a story for the records and one that I will be reading many times over. Well done Maonaigh. Well done!

Your stories are some of the best I have read. This one is particularly good. I love the character development and the fact that although, you should, and do use sex in your stories, your stories are much more than just sex. Please keep writing.

...to you all for your kind comments. To the Anon who mentioned that being lesbian does not preclude having children, I appreciate your point. In fact, Emma and Samantha (characters in two of my previous stories) have children. The implication I was making, possibly not too successfully, was that Vicki's mother could not visualise a lesbian daughter giving her grandchildren, while Vicki herself, perhaps only twenty-one or so and single when she came out, wasn't ready to think about it. Maybe in a future story if I can think of a good plot...?

Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful story with us! It made my week to read a love story that kept me until the end!

Thank you!

L

What a great story! It was very enjoyable to read. Will definitely g o back and read your previous stories. Great job.

SB

Hi

Being a straight heterosexual male, I am possibly supposed not to understand a 'lesbian story'. However, I Ioved this story, because good story-telling, combined with an insight into how people (gay, lesbian,hetero) interact in love and fear, is always wonderful. You're a fantastic writer with a fantastic language and lot's of empathy.

Cheers KG

A gorgeous story. Today is my first day on literotica. What a beautiful start.

Cynthia

cynthiafulman@yahoo.com

Such a good story that avoids the obvious and tired plot of old friends suddenly falling into bed.

On top of that, the secondary characters (the GF's and bar people) are unique and well drawn. After the pitfall of the friends falling for each other was missed, I was half expecting mirrored relationships in their love life. I was happy to see that women they went for were unique and had their own individual story to tell.

To take the story to the extent you did without making any of the usual clichés makes it very special

Your use of language is beautiful. While erotic, the plot and the characters make it so special and so much more. I'd read a whole novel about lesbians with happy endings if you were in charge, honestly.

...as I finish reading this beautiful story.

Please keep writing!

A novelistic story, with emotions more complex than lust. Nicely done.

A truly beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Maonaigh

Well. you did it again, a beautiful story, please keep the the good things coming.

I am waiting for more wonderful words coming from you.

RLG

My only complaint is, it wasn't long enough! :D

You are a fantastic author. Please keep writing these lovely stories!

I love a good love story. Such a wonderful tale of love.

Niamh proved to be coward and selfish, even if it was a one time thingt. What guaranty is there that she'll not bolt again when a situation arises. Vicky should be cautious before she trusts her fully again. If Niamh's trust is hard to gain, so should be Vicky's.

a star just to vote btw lesbos can't fuck, can't lose their virginity. they can ONLY poke a stick up each others butts. that ain't fuckin bitches, dream on...

Don't be a douche. That is all.

This is my second or third time thought it, and I loved it just as much as the first time I read it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

perfect last sentence to another perfect story

god, will you plz write forever :)

thks again

carrie

What a very nice story. I liked the characters and the storyline and if there had been no sex in at all then it will still have been a good story. With the sex it made it much more sizzling to read. I will have to work my way through your others.

Perfect. Absolutely beautiful.

I really felt all the emotions pouring out there. It was so moving. I really love this.

This is a sweet, wonderful love story. Not just a quick porno. People who seem real, reacting in real situations. I could be friends with any of them.

Loved the story. Love triumphs over all. Patience and understanding, sometimes that's something all we all need to practice. Thanks for writing a positive love story.

Just reread this and loved it all over again.

I'll second sandy_paris. This is permanently on my rereadable list.

Loved it

Thank the goddess I read this marvelous work.

Well deserving of 5 stars, and yet . . .

Without some conflict or adversity to be overcome, the story would be a puff piece. And so the element of Niamh's sudden, unexplained disappearance was necessary, but unfortunately it was contrived. Leaving that aside, it was a feel-good story that made me feel very good. So much to appreciate:

* The tawdry hellhole of Nancy's Nook giving rise to Johanna and the beautiful rehabilitation of Nancy, Viv, and Buttercup.

* The delightfully clever meme of "if you ask very nicely."

* The power of goodness to overcome the ugly distortions handed on in some religious traditions.

* ". . . the one who put the 'igs' in 'ignorant bigot.'" LOL

* "{O}ur lovemaking was the most breathtaking I had ever known, probably because it was driven by true love."

I am a better human being for having read Twilight Time. Thank you.

I have read a lot of stories on Literotica and this one stands heads above the lot of them. It had humor, romance, anguish, a fight scene, desertion, and most of all a dialogue between two friends that only portrayed the love and respect they had between each other. Well done. 5 Stars. Applause. Fireworks. You know what I mean.

Got to check out your other works.

Yet another wonderful story by a true master.

You know who I am.

RL

Pure perfect romance ...... Just sooooo lovely so cute so heartfilling ...... Thank you

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Your best story yet.I think it would be hard to top it.Thanks for using Niamh as one of your character names.It is one of my favourite Irish girl s names.I teared up towards the end and was happy that you also mentioned the Platters.One of my all time favourite 50s groups.And one of my favourite songs of theirs.Many many thanks Maonaigh.You are the best.👍👍❤❤5+stars.

Twowayman62

Truly Lovely!

Had everything a Love story could want!

Thank you!