All Comments on 'Twin Escalations'

More, please!

Nice first chapter!

Daddy needs to enjoy Sara, as much as he has the twins.

That will be explosive!

Hard all the way through. Awesome story! I can't wait for part two.

It would be something if the twins had matching baby bumps.

loved it, can't wait for more!

Damn! That was HAF, with hints of even spicier things to come. I'm with the others, I hope there's more of this, including, but not limited to, Sara making a sub out of Helen. Outstanding job! 5.

Kinda rushed. As you continue this story (as you MUST) take time and really develop the twins’ DD/LG kink.

And who will be the dom when daddy takes Sara?

really exciting

Great story...left me wanting more please.

While this was good still seemed a bit rushed and there was no real development of the twin's and daughter's relationship while hinted at it being a D/s type. I would like to suggest that the next one be a bit descriptive and I am hoping that Dad takes on the three as his subs

I loved the story. It did feel rushed; there was a lot more personal exploration that could have been done.

You're an excellent writer, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thanks for the encouragement and comments, everyone. I'd like to continue with a slower part 2 that I hope gives the right amount of detail as flashback before continuing the story.