All Comments on 'Twin Hearts Ch. 02'

well done please will there be more ? .hot sexy and fun.

I love all of your stories! The girl band idea is a great one. So many characters to play with in future editions.

I like your detailed storytelling very much! Your describtion of the sex scenes is very hot ;-). I read all your story multiple times and hope you will be back for more!

I would love to read more of this series, PenguinEmperor. I hope you're still out there.

Beautiful. Please continue. You sir have a gift of storytelling.

This seriously needs a part 3, maybe another member of Twin Hearts who's also in love with Paul gets to know about his relationship with Ashley, and maybe he also gets to fuck him out of jealousy? Or just to make him his lover, stealing him from Ashley? This still needs a part 3, anyway.

loved it

That was smoking hot. Please make part 3

Loved this story.

Definitely needs a part 3. Maybe the other girls join in. And Mikki is the biggest. :D