All Comments on 'Twin Magic'

An excellent start !

Very short, and you need an editor. Other than those two things, the tale has promise.

part 2 soon cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Looking forward to more!

I hope there's future chapters in this.

Please continue with more mischief!

I really like stories like this !! It gets me so hard and I'd love to simply try to imagine the feelings of their bodies as they get aroused. To feel his siter's boobs with his hands and palms, how hard her nipples are and her soft skin. Then the wetness of her pussy lips and her mouth. She feels his hard cock throbbing in her hand, the cockhead push her pussy lips open, the heat and wetness. Finally he squirts hard and the hot cum splashes and sticks to her skin. Erotic, now they need to actually make out hot n' heavy and then feel his hard cock and cockhead slowly spread her pussy lips open and how tight his cock feels as it throbs as it slides deep inside. Yes, we need another chapter or two so they can continue feeling things to the next level. They are trusting, loving and giving to each other. Thank you.

good story, lets have a follow up please

BUT the wimps of today who think they are men...

beginning. Nice story!

Thanks for keeping it realistic.

do another chapter, but this time, he thrusts his dick into her pussy over and over again (with them both fully naked too).

great beginning. need another chapter or 2.

chapter 2 oral chapter 3 take each other

Great start to a story, and it's believable too. But to be honest, I was little disappointed when I got to the end, but I am going on to chapter 2.